aapane adhiaapak

marahoom pro. mahindar singh cheemaa jee

dee yaad noo

eis ton pahilaan

ddaa. atar singh aalochanaa chintan sanpaa. 1996

panjaabee aalochanaa vichaaradhaarak paripekh, 1999

mohan bhanddaaree shabad sanvedanaa sanpaa., 2000

paranparaa te pravaah, 2002, 2009,

dalit drishattee sanpaa., 2004,

mith ate varatamaan sanpaa., 2005

mohanajeet suhaj te sanvedanaa sanpaa., 2005

paatth te paripekh, 2007

gadar lahir itihaas,

raajaneetee te saahit sanpaa., 2008

sanvaad te sanvedanaa, 2009

panjaabee bhaashaa varatamaan te bhavakh sanpaa., 2009

bhaaratee sansakritee daa kendar, ttaigor rachanaavalee 3 sanpaa., 2010

ttaigor de chonaven nibandh, ttaigor rachanaavalee4 sanpaa., 2010

vihaar te varataaraa, 2012

panjaabee kavitaa prasang te pravachan, 2014

tatakaraa

1. naveen panjaabee kavitaa fikar ate sarokaara ddaa. sarabajeet singh

2. 1990 ton baad dee naareevaadee kavitaa ddaa. minaakashee raatthauar

3. noor kaav jalaavatanaan dee vaapasee ddaa. sukhadev singh

4. manamohan daa kaav pravachana ddaa. yog raaj

5. jasavindar dee kavitaa de vichaaradhaarak sarokaara ddaa. sukhadev singh dhaaleevaal

6. amarajeet kauanke dee kavitaa ddaa. mohan tiaagee

7. savaranajeet savee de kaav sarokaara ddaa. jatindaradeep kauar

8. vilakhan muhaandare vaalee kavitaa devaneet kaava ddaa. paramajeet singh

9. darashan buttar dee kavitaa ddaa. guramel singh

10. sukhavindar amrit dee kavitaa pachhaan ate sarokaara ddaa. balajeet singh

11. sukhapaal kaav de sarokaara kamalapreet sidhoo

12. dalaveer kauar naaree vajood daa suaaleea pravachana ddaa. sarabajeet singh

13. madan veeraa kaav de sarokaara preet indar singh

14. eindarajeet nandan dee kavitaa de sarokaara ddaa. kiranajeet kauar

bhoomikaa

samakaalee saahit dee pachhaan karanaa jinaa sauakhaa prateet hundaa hai, asal vich ih kam onaa hee dushavaar hundaa hai kiaunk samakaal deean parisathiteean pratee itihaasak vivek dee zaroorat hundee hai taan hee samakaal vich rache jaa rahe saahit dee samajh tiaar keetee jaa sakadee hai| ithe ik sankatt val sanket karanaa bahut jrooree hai ki samakaal noo itihaasak nirantarataa vich dekhan dee bajaae aseen us noo pooravalee paranparaa de virodh vich dekhanaa suroo kar dinde haan| itihaasakataa parraavaan vich naheen sagon ik nirantarataa vich hundee hai| is nirantarataa vich jo samaan vihaa giaa yathaarath jaan kadar prabandh hai, auh jharradaa jaandaa hai ate navaan yathaarath ate kadar prabandh usaradaa jaandaa hai| aseen akasar naven yathaarath ate kadar prabandh noo pooravale yathaarath ate kadar prabandh de virodh vich jaan taan pramaanik darasaaun lag jaande haan, jaan nindan lag jaande haan| is karake isanoo samajhan ton khunjh jaande haan| suaal saahit noo samajhan daa hai| is karake naveen panjaabee kavitaa dee pachhaan karadiaan aseen uparokat sankatt daa shikaar ho jaande haan ate naveen panjaabee kavitaa noo aseen asalon navaan varataaraa samajh lainde han| itihaasak nirantarataa noo gair haazir karan karake naven sarokaaraan te kendarit ho ke naveen panjaabee kavitaa noo vishaveekaran ate upabhogee sabhiaachaar daa prachhaavaan sidh karan ch saaree taakat kharach kar dinde haan|

panjaab sankatt ton uparant saahamane aaee kavitaa noo naveen panjaabee kahike panjaab dee itihaasakataa ate yathaarathakataa ton mukat kar dinde haan| iaun prateet hon lag paindaa hai ki panjaab sankatt de khatam hon uparant raatoraat

aseen naveen panjaabee kavitaa de roobaroo ho ge haan| is karake naveen panjaabee kavitaa noo itihaasak gateesheelataa naal samajhan dee zaroorat hai| 1990 ton baad deean tabadeeleean ne panjaabee samaaj ate sabhiaachaar vich daakhal ho ke inhaan daa roopaantaran kee, kiven ate kiaun keetaa hai, noo samajhe bagair is jattil masale dee thaah naheen paaee jaa sakadee| is ton agaanh kavitaa ne is samache varataare pratee aapanaa pratihungaaraa kiven bhariaa, aus noo samajhanaa dushavaar hovegaa|

auparokat jattil masaliaan noo samajhan lee panjaab vibhaag, posattagraijooett kaalaj, saikattara46, chanddeegarrh ne panjaabee saahit akaaddamee, ludhiaanaa de sahiyog naal raashattaree saimeenaar naveen panjaabee kavitaa noo kendar vich rakhake aayojit keetaa| is daa mukh makasad naveen panjaabee kavitaa deean kujh gunjhalaan noo samajhanaasamajhaaunaa taan see hee parantoo naalon naal naveen panjaabee aalochanaa noo vee saahamane liaaunaa see| is saimeenaar vich kujh chonaven saaeiraan dee kavitaa upar dhiaan kendarit keetaa jadon ki hor vee mehatavapooran kavee jo naveen panjaabee kavitaa vich aapanee pachhaan banaa chuke han, auh is vich shaamal naheen keete jaa sake, eih sanbhav vee naheen see| saimeenaar vich pesh keete ge khoj pataraan de lekhak, kujh ku sathaapit aalochakaan noo chhaddake, bilakul naven han jo is khetar vich pichhale samen ton saragaramee naal kam kar rahe han|

eis pusatak vich baaraan shaaeiraan dee samachee rachanaa noo kendar vich rakhake likhe ge nibandh han| ih uh saaeir han jiharre naveen panjaabee kavitaa daa dris uleekan dee samarathaa rakhade han| naveen panjaabee kavitaa daa ik ubharavaan lachhan us de bahunaadee hon vich hai| is pusatak vich uh bahunaadee dhuneean suneean jaa sakadeean han jiharreean jazeeriaan vaang alag alag naheen sagon ik dooje naal sanvaad dee prakiriaa vich han| iho sanvaad is naveen kavitaa noo skateesaalee banaaundaa hai| jiharree kavitaa sanvaad dee prakiriaa vich naheen jaan taan uh savai sirajee lachhaman rekhaa dee sikaar hai jaan nijagat sarokaaraan noo sanchaar ke vedanaa dee seemaan vich ghiree hoee hai| uh kavitaa panjaabee bande, samaaj ate sabhiaachaar naal naa taan kheh ke langhadee hai ate naa hee yathaarath naal dasatapanjaa laindee hai| uh kavitaa sek rahit hai|

naveen panjaabee kavitaa pachhaan ate sarokaar kavitaa vich shaamal nibandhaan daa main lekhaa jokhaa naheen karanaa kiaunk ih aapanee gal pooree samarathaa naal sanchaar rahe han| inhaan nibandhaan vich jithe kendar bindoo saaeir dee rachanaa daa

vishalesn hai, authe naveen panjaabee kavitaa daa sandarabh vee haazar hai| einhaan nibandhaan dee khaaseeat hee ih hai ki jithe naveen panjaabee kavitaa de navenpan dee talaash keetee gee hai uthe is kavitaa de sarokaaraan dee vee nisaanadehee keetee gee hai| lagabhag har nibandh inhaan kaveean dee seemaan ate sanbhaavanaa pratee vee bebaak ho ke boladaa hai| is karake ih nibandh prasansaatamak biratee dee thaaven vislesnaatamak biratee de dhaaranee hai| ih biratee naveen panjaabee aalochanaa daa pachhaan bindoo hai| is karake ih nibandh aapane aap vich samarath hai|

eis pusatak dee tiaaree vich panjaabee vibhaag, posattagraijooett sarakaaree kaalaj, saikattara46, chanddeegarrh de adhiaapakaan daa vishes tauar te dhanavaadee haan jinhaan ne pooree mihanat karake saimeenaar daa aayojan keetaa| aapane param mitar ddaa. sukhadev singh daa jiharraa meree har aauakhasauakh vich naal kharrhadaa hai| deepak pabalisharaz daa vises tauar te dhanavaadee haan jinhaan ne pusatak noo chhaapan daa jinmaa liaa|

sarabajeet singh

naveen panjaabee kavitaa fikar ate sarokaara

ddaa. sarabajeet singh

panjaabee sameekhiaa vich navaan shabad noo khulhe ddule roop vich varatan daa rivaaj hai is noo sankalapavaachee roop ch samajhan dee thaaven kaalagat arathaan vich varatan dee paranparaa hai| chalant chhurarenatta, naveen, samakaalee, varatamaan aadik isade vibhin naam han| ddaa. atar singh ne bahut pahilaan aapanee pusatak kaav adhian vich isadaa nikherraa keetaa see par uh nikherraa panjaabee sameekhiaa daa ang naheen ban sakiaa| navaan neaa shabad noo jadon aseen sankalapavaachee roop ch dekhade haan taan ih nishache hee gunaatamak roop vich pichhale naalon bhin hundaa hai kiaunk fir ih kaalagat arathaan ton paar ik itahaasak morr, rujhaan jaan ik praviratee de arathaan daa dhaaranee ho jaandaa hai| kaalagat arathaan vich jo kujh varatamaan vich rachiaa jaa rihaa hai, auh sabh navaan hai bhaaven uh aapane subhaa, saroop ate sangatthan pakhon madhakaalee, jaan puraatan hee kiaun naa hove| ih tath roop ch sapashatt hai ki jo kujh vee samakaal vich rachiaa jaa rihaa hai, auh navaan naheen hai| unj naveenataa dee talaash kiton vee keetee jaa sakadee hai| visaa, drishattee, jugataan, bhaashaa,roopaakaarak badalaao, shilapee tajarabe aadik koee ikalaakaaharaa pahiloo vee naveenataa daa sanket de sakadaa hai parantoo uh navaan is karake naheen hundaa kiaunk uh kise itihaasak morr noo sathaapat naheen karadaa| nirantar parivaratan ate gateeseelataa taan samaaj dee prakiratee hai parantoo jadon paranparakataa de bahute lachhan gaaeib hone suroo ho jaande han te naven lachhan, gun ate vishestaavaan agarabhoomee te aauneean shuroo ho jaandeean han taan pravaah andar itihaasak morr utapan hundaa hai| doosaraa, panjaabee saahit vich jadon tak itihaasak morr daa naamakaran naheen ho jaandaa, audon tak uh naven de anuvaan hetth hee vichaariaa jaandaa hai| naamakaran viakateegat ichhaa daa lakhaaeik naheen hundaa, eih unhaan itihaasak parisathiteean ne hee sirajanaa hundaa hai jiharreean itihaasak parisathiteean ne us itihaasak morr deean vibhin vishestaavaan, lachhan ate gunaan dee sirajanaa keetee hundee hai|

naveen panjaabee kavitaa panjaabee sameekhiaa vich us noo kihaa jaandaa hai jo panjaab sankatt ton baad paidaa hoee hai| is kavitaa daa naam samaanaantar kavitaa vee kihaa giaa kiaunk is samen kee theemaan ate vichaaradhaarak drishatteean dee kavitaa rachee gee hai| is vich dehavaadee kavitaa, jashan dee kavitaa, piaar

kaav, sabhiaachaarak udarevaan, dalit kaav, naaree kaav aad shaamal han ajihee theemagat kavitaa noo vichaaradhaarak tanaavaan te vakhareve, drishatteegat nikherre ate virodh, soojh maaddalaan de antar davand ate kashamakas noo iko roop vich saveekaar kar liaa giaa| is daa buniaadee kaaran ih hai ki is itihaasak parraa noo baaharamukhee roop vich pachhaaniaa hee naheen giaa jis karake dhundalake dee sathitee banee rahindee hai|

panjaabee manakh dee sanvedanaa ch faisalaakun tabadeeleean vaaparan dee sathitee 1990 ton baad banadee hai parat is noo samajhanaa is lee zarooree hai ki is dee sathitee saaveen naheen see| panjaab us samen tap rihaa see| ik paase moolavaadee taakat daa khauaf see taan dusare paase sataadhaaree taakat daa jabar see| panjaab dee raajaneetak samasiaa noo sanparadaaeik samasiaa banaake mahij amanakaanoon dee samasiaa raaheen sulajhaaun dee sathitee ne samache haalaat ton nazar hee bhattakaa ditee see| bhaaratee burajvaa sataa 1990 ton baad vishaveekaran, audaareekaran ate nijeekaran de lubhaavane sarasabaz baag raaheen bhaaratee janataa noo hathiaa rahee see| bhaaratee burajvaa taakat sansaar saramaaedaaree naal saanjhabhiaalee raaheen bhaaratee manakh noo anevaah soshan de hanhere vich dhak rahee see| teesaraa,vishav vich samaajavaadee prabandhaan de dteh dteree hon naal samaajee badal daa supanaa alatternattive daream odd sochiette maand pai rihaa see| saramaaedaaree ne vishav vich aisee charr machaa ditee ki duneean vasatooaan de harrh vich gunm guaachan lagee| panjaabee manakh jo panjaab de sankatt ton bhaiabheet see, ausanoo amanakaanoon ne jithe raahat ditee uthe sidhe upabhogataa de khulhe baazaar vich liaa kharrhaa keetaa| ik paase valoondharee maanasikataa, dooje paase upabhogataa daa aalam te teejaa samaajavaadee samaaj daa khinddaa panjaabee manakh noo savaikendarit sarokaaraan val dhakel ke lai giaa| soochanaa ate sanchaar saadhanaan de belagaam pasaare ne manakhee maanasikataa noo baazaaraunamukh karan lee siratorr yatan hee naheen keetaa sagon is noo tej gatee vee pradaan keetee| panjaabee manakh jo varajanaavaan ate naitikataa dee lachhaman rekhaa vich see us noo kaamuk, dehavaadee ate ichhaamoolak rishate aakarasit karan lage te uh panraparak ate naitik riste naatiaan ton vith thaapan lag piaa|

vishaveekan deean neeteean sadakaa bhaaratee burajuaajee pabalik saikattar noo ghaattevandaa sauadaa kahike nigameekaran ate nijeekaran de raah paindee hai taan usadaa pragateeseel kiradaar khatam hoke usadee damanakaaree biratee udai hundee hai| is naal jo madhavarag ttareddayooneeanaan jaan sansathaavaan vich jurrake prateerodh dee aavaaz banadaa see uh khtam honaa suroo ho jaandaa hai kiaunk burajvaa prabandh daa kaaeidaa

kaanoon saramaaedaaree de hathaan vich saramaaedaaree dee prafalataa daa hathatthokaa ban jaandaa hai| samachee bhaaratee raajaneetee daa rukh sataa tabadeelee banan lagadaa hai| viddanbanaa ih hai ki saramaaedaar paaratteean jinhaan deean neeteean ate rananeeteean vich bahutaa farak naheen, auh hee samachee sapes upar kaabaz ho jaandeean han| dakhanapanthee taakataan daa ubhaar is sapes noo bilakal bharake prateerodh vaaleean shakateean ton saaree taakat khoh laindaa hai| ih uh sathitee banadee hai ki bhaaratee manakh kol badal naheen hai| us noo sabh paase jo niraastaa dikhaaee dindee hai, ausade hal dee talaash val naheen turadaa sagon saramaaedaaree upabhogataa, viakateegat aazaadee de bharam dee daladal vich fasadaa turiaa jaandaa hai|

auparokat sathitee vichon panjaabee manakh dee sanvedanaa aapanaa saroop praapat karan lagadee hai| ih sanvedanaa daa pahilaa ikaraar viakateegat savai naal hundaa hai te uh samaajak ate samoohik rishataa naataa prabandh ton inakaar karadaa hai| ikaraar ate inakaar poonjeevaadee samaaj dee antar sojhee hai| ih sojhee panjaabee manakh noo aapanee viakateegat hond dee pramaanikataa daa sabak parraaundee hai| viakatee samaajakataa ton door hee naheen hundaa sagon niralep hundaa hai| ithon hee uh aapane savain dee hond de bharam noo sutantar hasatee vajon chitavanaa aaranbh karadaa hai

toon mainoo rishatiaan de daaeiriaan

vich kharraa karake naa dekheen

main taan aazaad fijaa vich

vicharanaa chaahundaa haan

benaam havaa vaang

jithe rishate

shaabadik manthan

ton ilaavaa kujh vee naheen

toon mainoo rishatiaan de daaeiriaan

vich kharrhaa karake naa vekhee...........

jasapaalajeet chup de tahikhaaniaan chon, panaa41

mere ton khoh lavo saare falasafe, saaree vidavataa, saaraa bodh ki maithon raj ke muhabat naheen hundee hun

hasadaa haan taan hasan daa sidhaant saahamane lattak jaandaa hai

rondaa haan taan koee chup chaap mainoo vekhadaa te fir varaaundaa hai

chup baitthadaa haan taan koee mukatee daa falasafaa samajhaaundaa hai........

chintan ch ddubadaa haan taan

man maarakas daa padaarath yaad karaaundaa hai..

mainoo bhulaa hee devo jiaoon de saare sidhaant

mere lahoo chon kasheed kar lavo naanak, budh te rajaneesh

ki main taan aapane antar ton shuroo ho ke brahimandd teek

aapanee maualikataa naal khud failanaa hai...

tejavindar, aasathaa panaa29

viddanbanaa ih hai ki kavitaa samaajak sarokaaraan noo mihanaa samajhadee hoee saramaaedaaraanaa antarasojhee de viakateegat janjaal vich fasadee turee jaandee hai| ih manakh zindagee dee bihataree lee kise samaajak badal dee talaash de thaaven savai dee bhramik aajaadee vich samohit honaa suroo ho jaandaa hai| samaajak fikar naalon vichhunee kavitaa bhaavanaa de amorr vahin vich ghar, rishatiaan de sankalap ton mukat ho ke prakiratak aazaadee daa supanaa labhan de raah pai jaandee hai| ih supanaa khapatee sabhiaachaar naal grahiniaa hoeaa kaamanaamee hoke kaam ate deh de anhekhooh vich dduban lee tiaar hai

pooran tainoo patai

tere jineean khoobasoorat galaan

koee naheen kar sakadaa

duneean de sabh ton

khoobasoorat marad naal pee vee main

tere mishan naal

kaaeinaat rachan lorradee haan karadee aan

teree upaasanaa

karadee aa main kaamadev

jasaveer kauar, manthan, panaa27

torrake umaraa de bandhan

dag piaa chiharaa usadaa

aulangh ke samaaj deean valaganaan

khich ke gal ch piaa mangalasootar

bhulaake hathaan deean hathakarreean

te laah ke pairaan deean berreean

dag piaa chiharaa usadaa

amarajeet kauanke, shabad rahinage kola

panjaabee kavitaa daa ik vaddaa hisaa ghar ate rishatiaan de upar parihaar karadaa hai| binaan sk jaageeroo gharaparivaar ate ristiaan daa naittavarak pitaa purakhee sataa kaaran damanakaaree hai parantoo inhaan ristiaan ton inakaar siraf te siraf kaamanaamee roop ch hoke dehavaadee sarokaaraan tak hee sungarr jaave taan ih hor vee vadhere khataranaak hovegaa kiaunk jaageeroo kadar prabandh vaale ghar parivaar de daman noo anaarakisatt roop ch hee tahis nahis karake saramaaedaaraanaa viakateegat aazaadee vich us ton mukat honaa tasavar kar lainaa bahut vaddee bhul hai| itihaas gavaah hai ki saramaaedaaraanaa viakateegat aajaadee daman dee ghinaaunee hakeekat hai jisanoo pachham bhugat rihaa hai| viakateegat aajaadee dee bhaavanaa naal labarej ih kavitaa gharaparivaar ate rishatiaan ton munakar hoke ih sataa noo koee vangaar pes naheen karadee sagon sataa noo sarav karan lag paindee hai|

naveen panjaabee kavitaa vich upabhogataa,manddee, eishatihaar ate vasataan daa bahut virodh hai te virodh vee bahut uchee sur vich hai| jis kavitaa kol vichaaradhaarak soojh naheen hai, auh inhaan masaliaan naal shabadee jang larradee hai| ajihee kavitaa upabhogataavaad noo mahiz vasataan tak dekh rahee hai| ih us saajis noo naheen pachhaanadee jis naal manakhee sanvedanaa noo sun karake usanoo samaajakataa ton vichhuniaan jaandaa hai| samaajakataa ton vichhunanaa te savai tak sungerr den daa varataaraa ainaa khataranaak hai ki manakh lagaataar samaaj ton niralep ate sithal hundaa chaliaa jaandaa hai| samaajee jeevan baare usadaa sochanaa jaan kalapanaa karanaa khtam hundaa chaliaa jaandaa hai| vasataan dee upabhogataa de khalajagan vich fasiaa uh sataa, prabandh ate aapane ute ho rahe daman pratee khaamosh ho jaandaa hai| ih khaamosee dee raajaneetee sabh ton khtaranaak hundee hai| ise noo paas sabh ton khataranaak kavitaa vich ankit karadaa hai| naveen panjaabee kavitaa daa vaddaa hisaa is khaamoshee dee raajaneetee daa sikaar hai| is karake ih naahavaadee yathaarath de virodh dee kavitaa masaliaan ate varataariaan dee teh vich naa jaa ke manakhee soch noo saan te naheen laa rahee jis naal uh aapane yug noo samajhan de yog ho sake|

poonjeevaadee antar drishattee dee grahinee kavitaa de samaanaantar ajihee kavitaa bhaaven alap maataraa vich hai parantoo uh manakhee sanvedanaa noo sun kar den vaaleean parisathiteean naal dasatapanjaa laindee hai| poonjeevaad dee jakarr siraf aarathik vaseeliaan upar hee naheen sagon is ne sabhiaachaarak ate kalaavaan andar vee ajihee ghus paitth keetee hai ki koee vee khetar is ton achhootaa naheen rihaa| samache jeevan de andar ih aapanee kiriaaseelataa noo kiven banaa rahee hai, eis noo samajhan vaalee vichaaradhaarak kavitaa naveen pragateesheel panjaabee kavitaa dee pachhaan banadee hai

roshanee de is yug vich vee

sir charrhake bol rihaa hai hanheraa

hanhere ne badal liaa hai

aapanaa poore daa pooraa kainavas

hanheraa hun rangaan chon boladaa hai

hanheraa hun roshanee chon boladaa hai

hanheraa hun geet chon boladaa hai

hanheraa har sangeet chon boladaa hai

mohan tiaagee,lahoo dee viraasat, panaa42

poonjeevaad ne manakh kolon changere samaaj daa supanaa khoh ke usanoo laalasaa ditee hai| madhavaragee manakh is laalasaa ch grafat ho ke jeevan noo jashan de roop vich saveekaar kar rihaa hai| dooje paase kiratee ate silapakaaraan kolon kirat ate hunar khoh ke usanoo midhamasal ditaa hai| viakateegat jasn dee kavitaa savai de irad girad mahimaamee maahaual sirajan val ruchit hai te is de samaanaantar samaajak fikar naal labarez kavitaa kiratee de dukhaant noo sirajan pratee ruchit hai| is kavitaa daa paatar jhanbiaajhulasiaa hoeaa jroor hai parantoo uh parisathiteean age haariaa hoeaa naheen| is paatar noo sirajan vaalaa saaeir aap samaajak sarokaaraan pratee chetan hai| is karake us dee kavitaa vich samaaj daa dukhaant baar baar fikar de roop vich ubhar ke saahamane aaundaa hai| bhaaven parisathiteean amaanavee han, prateerodhak aavaaz dee lahir vee gairahaajir hai parantoo shaaeir is sathitee de dukhaant noo chetanaa daa prateek banaa ke pes kar rihaa hai

mere kol koee maualik supanaa naheen hai

eis lee uh hee galaan duharaa rihaa haan

duharaa naheen rihaa

vaar vaar kar rihaa haan

kise naven supane de dharan lee

koee jaghaa naheen ethe

eih use supane dee jaman kiriaa hai

bas zaraa lamee ho gee hai

raajavindar meer, kaale ful, panaa27

bifaree hai bhattakan hor vee

kujh larrakharraaee hai tor vee

aje manzalaan daa savaal kee

aje rasatiaan dee talaash hai|

raajindarajeet, saave akas, panaa44

samaajak fikar vaalee kavitaa vishaveekaran de baazaar de aatank, aupabhogataavaad de hamale noo ikahire varataare vajon naheen dekhadee| jithe ih kavitaa inhaan varataariaan naal samaajak badal vaalee chetanaa ate supane dee kamazor sathitee pratee chetan hai, authe vishaveekaran daa panjaabee samaaj, panjaabee sabhiaachaar, panjaabee manakh ate samaajak rishatiaan upar kee asar hai, aus pratee vee ik nazareean pesh karadee hai| pichhale ddedtado dahaakiaan vich vises tauar te panjaabee kisaanee ate khet mazadooraan daa jo jeevan tahis nahis hoeaa hai, aus pratee is kavitaa daa hungaaraa vishes dhiaan dee mang karadaa hai| sataraviaan de dauar vich vaaparee haree karaantee jisane panjaab dee aarathikataa noo vaddaa hulaaraa ditaa see, auh haree karaantee kheteebaarree daa rasaaeineekaran see| doosaraa, saramaaedaaree daa ih maaddal kachaa maal praapat karan daa hee saadhan see| jis rafataar naal panjaab dee kisaanee ne fasalee utapaadan vich vaadhaa keetaa see, aus rafataar vich panjaab vich sanateekaran dee prakiriaa vadhee failee naheen see| panjaab noo siraf an paidaa karan vaalaa soobaa hee banaaeaa giaa jis de door ras sitte aj panjaab bhugat rihaa hai| kheteebaarree de masheeneekaran ate rasaaeineekaran ne panjaab de paanee, panjaab dee dharatee, panjaab de prakiratak jeevan ate panjaab de vaataavaran vich zahir ghol ditee | vigiaanak dtang naal panjaab dee dharat dee parakhaparrachol keete binaan hee andhaadhund kanak, jhonaa, kapaahanarame raaheen dharatee noo kache maal daa kendar banaa ditaa giaa| panjaab dee dharatee vichon utapan hon vaaleean fasalaan dee punachhaan uparant panjaab vich vaddee padhar upar aigaroeinddasattaree dee zaroorat see| par panjaab de hukamaraanaan daa is val koee dhiaan hee naheen giaa| nateejaa ih hoeaa

ki panjaab dee kisaanee rasaaeineekaran de bojh hetth kangaaleekaran de rasate tur pee| panjaab de sankatt ne panjaab dee aarathikataa noo jo midh masal ditaa see taan vishaveekaran ne is prakiriaa noo ainaa tez kar ditaa ki panjaabee kisaanee khudakuseean de rasate pai gee| bhaaven ki panjaab de mukaabale bhaarat de horanaan soobiaan vich vadhere kisaanaan ne khudakusee hai par is varataare noo ik samaajaka aarathik vivasathaa de varataare vajon samajhan dee jroorat hai| khudakusee hai taan viakateegat amal parantoo ih viakateegat amal ik samaajeeaarathik vivasathaa dee den hai| is samen panjaab apang soobaa hai jiharraa inhaan kaaranaan karake nasiaan de naagaval vich kas chukiaa hai| jithe rasaaeineekaran ate khaadaan ne panjaab dee dharat ate vaataavaran dee sihat daa naas keetaa hai, authe nashiaan ne panjaabee manakh dee sihat daa satiaanaas kar ditaa hai| panjaab dee dharat tarrap rahee hai te panjaabee manakh vikaraal hanhere vich fasiaa hoeaa panjaab de is dukhaantak yathaarath noo panjaabee kavitaa ne herave jaan rudan dee thaaven yathaarathak roop ch sanchaaran daa yatan keetaa hai|

eih haragobindapuraa hai

jis de hetthaan

khaaree jheel firadee hai

eik ghutt bhariaa

siaarraan de saah suk jaande han

haragobindapure de ute

sukee nahir vag rahee hai

baheean ch lage gootthe

aug rahe han

hor

auche ho rahe han

sarakandde de bharaven boottiaan

vaang

khetaan ch kharreean kanakaan

hath jorree kanb raheean han

suke sanghee keh raheean han

sarakanddiaan noo

nadeen tuseen naheen

aseen ho geean haan

devaneet, hun sattaalin chup hai, panaa26

panjaab dee mihanatakash lokaaee kangaaleekaran de rasate te hai| samaajak vikaas dee prakiriaa vichon paranparak ate shilapee lok maseeneekrit vasataan raaheen bedakhal ho rahe han| maseeneekaran panjaab dee dharat daa naheen hai sagon bahu kauamee kanpaneean dee ajaaredaaree hai| panjaabee manakh taan upabhogee hai| visveekaran, nijeekaran dee prakiriaan betahaashaa lutt dee prakiriaa hai| nijee adaariaan vich kam karan vaalee hunaramand skatee niradhaarat mazadooree naalon kee gunaan ghatt majdooree upar kam karan lee majaboor hai| visveekaran dee prakiriaa samachee sanpatee ate dhan noo kujh vadde gharaaniaan de nijee hathaan ch ikatar karan lee agarasar hai| is damanakaaree prakiriaa noo bhaaratee burajuaajee ate vishavee saamaraaj dee saantthagaantth dee naveen sattaraittijee vajon dekhan dee zaroorat hai par is de kiradaar vich antar naheen hai| is daa kiradaar pahilaan naalon vee vadhere hinsak ate betaras hoeaa hai

girajhaan kidhare naheen geean

aunhaan ne taan bas

roop, rang te ves badale ne

kaaliaan ton chitte

hon de bhes badale ne

chajaaachaar

shisttaachaar badale ne

chunjhaan, panje te

kujh hathiaar badale ne

khaanapeen

auddan de abhiaas badale ne

kee hoeaa je girajhaan ne

naan ate nivaas badale ne

auj girajhaan moeean naheen aje

bhalaan girajhaan

mar vee kiven sakadeean ne

auh taan har mauasam te

nazar rakh sakadeean ne

auh sabh kujh hazam

kar sakadeean ne

auh kade

akadeean thakadeean ne

auh taan hun

auche manddalaan dee havaa bhakhadeean ne

balavindar sandhoo, komal singh aakhadaa hai, panaa3233

naveen panjaabee kavitaa vich ithe ik hor masalaa nikherre dee mang karadaa hai ki uh saaree dee saaree kavitaa jo samaajak fikaraan ate sarokaaraan vaalee hai, auh saaree dee saaree vichaaradhaarak tauar te pragateevaadee naheen, sagon bahutee kavitaa samaajak niaan dee talaash karadee kavitaa hai| is kavitaa kol samaajak fikar han, samaajak santaap han, samaajak saraap han, samaajak chintaavaan han| parantoo is kol uh chintan jaan antar drishattee naheen hai jo samaajak saraapaan ate santaapaan ton paar laa sake| ih kavitaa maanavakaaree taan hai, maanavee santaapaan naal labarez dukhaantak chitaraan dee sirajanaa karadee hoee ih jaan taan kattaakash vich tabadeel hai jaandee hai jaan santaapee manakhataa dee laachaarataa vich leh jaandee hai| ithe panhuch ke hee kavitaa dee samaajee saarathikataa ate prasangakataa daa masalaa udai ho jaandaa hai| kavitaa ne chitarit chitar vich chintanee sanbhaavanaavaan vee jagaauneean hundeean han jinhaan ne manakhee manachat vich chetanaa de beej beejane hunde han| ajihee chetanaa lee saaeir kol prasangak ate saarathik daarasnik sojhee dee jroorat hundee hai| naveen panjaabee kavitaa vich daarasnik sojhee dee bahut vaddee ghaatt hai| is karake ih kavitaa naven yug vich aapane maualik supane sirajan ton asamarath hai| pragateevaadee darasn naal bajhee kavitaa kol puraanaa chintan hai| ih kavitaa jekar koee surakh supanaa sirajadee hai taan uh supanaa bahut puraaneean antara sojheean daa hee punar anuvaad hai| badale yug deean parisathiteean vich ih supanaa kiho jihaa hove eis sanbandhee sanvaad bahut ghatt hai|

naveen panjaabee kavitaa vich ajoke yug de darakaar masale udai ho rahe han| is kavitaa vich santaapaan dee pachhaan bahut ahim hai| ih pachhaan manakh noo samaajik niaan dee talaash naal jorran daa kam zaroor karadee hai

putaro

chhaavaan mangade hon tthandteean

havaavaan karade hon nit zahireeleean te tateean

rangaan mereean ch paanee muk rihai

bulaan te sikaree

saah ghatt rihai

mauan ho rahee hai meree kahaanee

duaale failadee disadee tarakee tuhaaddee

jangal pahaarraan katt raheean masheenaan

chimaneean chon utthadeean aauah kaaleean fauajaan

aah vichhiaa daladalee badaboodaar paanee

rahoo pataa karoonbal jaan koee haree ttaahanee

kadon aaoo koee

chahikade panchheean dee dtaanee

tuseen taan mangade

havaavaan masat

chhaavaan tthandteean

te seet paanee

savaranajeet savee, maan, panaa96

samaajak santaap ate fikar vaalee kavitaa kol bahut prashan han| par ih kavitaa samaajik niaan dee talaas de maanavee paasaar ton agaanh naheen turadee| parantoo bahut ghatt sanvaad vaalee pragateevaadee nakasaan vaalee kavitaa paranparak prageetavaad ton agaanh vaalee samaajak niaan lee us supane noo jagaaundee hai jiharraa supanaan mauajoodaa laalasaamee upabhogee trisnaavaan ton inakaar karadaa hai| is kavitaa daa kaav paatar aapane andar visvaasee chetanaa noo jagaaundaa hai jo aniaan de khilaaf manakhee soch ate sanbhaavanaavaan noo prajavalat karadee hai

havaavaan aakhadeean ne

aa toon saadde naal

aseen jis dishaa noo jaaeee

pate saaddee chaal vekhade

aa jaande ne pichhe pichhe

toon vee patiaan naal paa lai dosatee

khanbh aapane morr ke toon jeb ch paa lai

......................

aavaazaan de jamaghatte vich

main kinake jihaa kanbee jaavaan

mere andar kine beej ne khanbhaan vaale

mere andar dhupaan chhaavaan daa

eik pahiredaar hai baitthaa

eise lee einakaar

aje vee shabad hai meraa

haravindar bhanddaal, charaagaahaan to paar, panaa54

prageeteevaadee nakashaan vaalee naveen kavitaa jisadaa supanaa bhattak giaa see, auh kavitaa samaajak niaan talaashadee kavitaa naalon aapane aap noo vakh karadee hai| ih vakharataa virodh vaalee naheen hai sagon vichaaradhaarak sanvaad vaalee hai|

eis dauar vich pachhaan dee raajaneetee daa masalaa ubhar ke saahamane aaeaa hai| ih pachhaan dee raajaneetee samaajak niaan de naal naal aapanee vakharee hond ate hasatee naal vee jurree hoee hai| jaateegat kendarit bahut saareean sabhaavaan ate sansathaavaan hond vich aaeean han| braahaman sabhaa, khataree sabhaa, raamagarrheean, vaalameekee ate dalit tabake naal sanbandhit ih sansathaavaan vakharee hond ate hasatee daa soochak han| inhaan sabh vichon jekar kavitaa vich kise dhir noo sanchaar miliaa hai taan uh dalit chetanaa noo miliaa hai| dalit chetanaa naveen panjaabee kavitaa vich ubharaven sur vich hai prantoo ih saaree chetanaa ikon vichaaradhaarak andaaz dee naheen hai| is kavitaa daa ik hisaa anbedakaravaadee vichaaradhaaraa ton prerit hai ate doosaraa hisaa maarakasavaadee drishattee naal sanbandhit hai| is kavitaa dee pramakh dhunee samaajak niaan dee dhunee hai| dalit varataaraa raajaneetik tauar te chetan hon karake isane bhaaratee raajaneetee vich vee ik bhoomikaa nibhaaee hai| parantoo dalit chetanaa dee samaajak niaan dee dhunee jadon tak vichaaradhaarak safar teh karake dalit ate hor damanakrit dhiraan naal saanjhe roop ch agaanh naheen turadee udon tak ih kavitaa dalitavaad dee jilan chon baahar naheen nikaladee| naveen panjaabee kavitaa vich dalit chetanaa de sanvaad chon ih pahiloo sapashatt tauar te ubhar rihaa hai ki dalit chetanaa daa masalaa pachhaan dee raajaneetee ate samaajak niaan ton age pragateesheel raajaneetak chetanataa daa ban rihaa hai| is lee naveen panjaabee

kavitaa dalit varataare noo sahee, vigiaanak ate baaharamukhee paripekh vich grahin kar rahee hai|

maaf karanaa

main ekalaviaa varagaa shis naheen haan

jo makaar guroo de kahin te

aapanaa angootthaa katt diaangaa

auh taan mere purakhe bhulekhe vich san

jo samajh naa sake

ki durayodhanaan de guroo

dule dee jaat noo

kiaun banaaunage teer andaaz

main avagiaa karaangaa

aunhaan sabh mithaan dee

jo laalon noo

rukhaa misaa khaa ke

tthandtaa paanee peen deean naseehataan dindeean han

kiaunk main jaan giaa haan

baabar videshee te

malak bhaago desee dee iko jaat hai

haramesh malaarree, navaan zamaanaa, 27 maarach 2011

main vee aagiaakaaree putar vaang

kitaabaan noo alavidaa keh

khetaan ch kharraa reh sakadaa saan

ddarane vaang

pataa naheen kiaun

sadeean ton vagaar karadiaan

moe pashoo dindiaan

ekalaviaa dee kul de

chiraagaan lee

main larranaa chaahundaa haan

gurameet kalaramaajaree, haasheea lok, akatoobaradasanbara2010, panaa106

dalit chetanaa naal sanbandhit kavitaa jo laal singh dil ate sant raam udaasee ton baad pachhaan dee raajaneetee ate samaajik niaan lee aavaaz sanchaaradee see| uh kavitaa gusail, tez taraar, aakaroshee tevaraan ch grafat see| parantoo naveen kavitaa raajaneetak chetanaa de prateemaanaan noo siraj ke nav braahamanavaad ton vee mukat hundee hai ate dalit mukatee daa pravachan vee sirajadee hai| ih kavitaa anbedakaravaadee vichaaradhaaraa ate maarakasavaadee jeevan darashan ch virodh naheen sirajadee sagon sanvaadee dasatapanje raaheen unhaan samaajak raajaneetak sataavaan noo vangaar den de rasate turadee hai| naveen panjaabee kavitaa daa ih ubharavaan fikar ate sarokaar hai| ih kavitaa ik paase varatamaan ch vishaveekaran de varataare noo samajh rahee hai jiharree dalit ate silapee kaame noo haaseeaagat karake gurabat ch dhakel rahee hai ate dusare paase bhaaratee samaaj deean bajar paranparaavaan ate jaateegat avachetan naal kheh rahee hai| naveen panjaabee kavitaa vich madan veeraa, satapaal bheekhee, jai paal, gurameet kalaramaajaree, santokh sukhee aadik shaaeiraan dee kavitaa vich dalit manakh dee pachhaan paranparak naheen hai| uh badaladeean itihaasak parisathiteean vich aj de yug dee haanee hai|

naveen panjaabee kavitaa jo samaajik niaan dee talaash val turadee hai| us talaas val rachee jaa rahee naaree kavitaa vee vises tauar te dhiaan khichadee hai| vishaveekaran deean neeteean ate sanchaar saadhanaan ne aauarat daa binb jo pes keetaa hai, auh hai taan upabhogee vasatoo varagaa hee parantoo usanoo aazaad hasatee de sunahiree varak vich lapett ke keetaa hai| is samen naaree aavaaj jinee mukhar hoee hai onee pahilaan naheen see| pahilee kavitaa marad virodhataa chon aapane arath praapat karadee see parantoo naveen kavitaa maradaaveen sataapitarakee sataa ton vidaroh karake aapanee hond ate hasatee daa masalaa samaajak niaan vajon utthaaundee hai| is dauar vich naaree duaaraa rachit kaav dehavaadee te kaamanaamee vee hai parantoo samaajak fikar ate sarokaar vaalee kavitaa is lee vadhere prasangak ate saarathak hai kiaunk uh naaree noo dehik aabajaikatt dee thaaven ik samaajak ate sabhiaachaarak hond vajon sirajadee hai| viakateegat sungerr dee kavitaa parivaarak saradal ate deh dee seemaan naheen ulanghadee| ajihee kavitaa manechhat rishatiaan de romaans vich simatt jaandee hai| ih kavitaa samaajee sanvaad dee naheen viakateegat monolaag dee kavitaa hai jiharree vichaaradhaarak rasate dee talaas naheen karadee sagon maanasik kathaarasiz dee kavitaa hai| ih kavitaa dee dhunee gunbadee aavaaj varagee hai jo andaro andaree goonj ke khaamos ho jaandee hai

toon jo vaapar rihain

kise krishamen vaang

beh rihai mere andar

kise pahaarree chashame vaang

main jo pee hoee saan jangal vich

khaamosh tel vaang

jhool gee haan tere naal

kise vel vaang

sajan

toon ik viraatt rukh

te main teree goorrhee chhaan dee chup........

simarat gagan, tasabee, panaa82

naaree kavitaa daa vaddaa hisaa inakaar, asaveekaar ate visathaapatee naal sanbandh hai| inakaar ate asaveekaar ton baad is kavitaa dee tthaahar manechhat rishate dosatamahiboob vich banadee hai| ih ristaa samaajakataa ch roopaantarit hon ton pahilaan vee jaan baad vich vishaad dee sathitee ch badal jaandaa hai kiaunk naaree kaav vivasathaavee prabandh ate pitarakee avachetan noo naheen samajhadaa parantoo naveen kavitaa daa alap hisaa naaree dee hond ate hasatee noo bhaavuk, romaansee ate kalapit chitaraan dee thaaven vivekamee ate chintanasheel dris vich sirajadaa hai| ih dris naaree dee hond noo samaajak fikar ate sarokaar de roop ch sanchaarade han| ise karake ih kavitaa monolaag dee thaaven sanvaad ate bhaavuk inakaar dee thaaven vichaaradhaarak soojh naal pesh karadee hai

main ik asaveekrit paatar haan

dohaan hee dhiraan noo asaveekaar

eik dhir noo

siraf ehee yaad rahindaa

ki main ik aauarat haan

doojee dhir

siraf ehee bhul jaandee

ki main ik aauarat haan

neetoo arorraa, savaalaan de sanamakh, panaa27

saahamane saagar hai

piaas man

tarrap

dehak rahe ne

meree chhaatee ch basa

laavaa hai khiaalaan daa

teraa mahikanaa musakaraaunaa

fizaavaan ch ghuladaa hai

man ch fir uhee savaal hai

ttikaanaa naheen hai

simattiaa manakh

bharam jaandaa hai

sahim ton baahar aaunaa chaahe taan

eichhaavaan ch bhattak jaandaa hai..............

amarajeet ghunman, kadanb, panaa48

naaree kaav daa savar aazaadee dee chaahat hai| is chaahat noo samajhanaa jrooree hai kiaunk niaansheelataa de andaroonee tat saar noo taan hee samajhiaa jaa sakadaa hai| ik paase naaree kaav fiaooddal kadar prabandh pitarakee sataa, naitik maan mariyaadaa pratee inakaareean savaal jagaaundaa hai taan doosare paase saramaaedaaraanaa urabhogataa ne tathaakathit aazaadee de naam hetth us dee dehik aajaadee noo jashan te upabhogataa dee vasat vich palatt ditaa hai| is pratee naaree kaav daa savar chintanaseel ghatt hai parantoo is noo uh achet padhar upar saveekaar karake aapane faisale khud karan de visvaas noo drirr karadee hai| doosaraa, pahiloo ih vee ahim hai ki samachaa naaree kaav horanaan damanakrit dhiraan naal kise tarhaan vee sahihond dee sathitee vich naheen hai| ih kavitaa inakaar, asaveekaar jaan saveekaar siraf naaree hond te hee kendarit karadaa hai

naheen basa

main aganee preekhiaa naheen

devaangee hun

main raam naal rahaan

jaan raavan naal

jaan kise hor naal

eih faisalaa hun main karaangee.

kamalapreet sidhoo, auneendare chiraag, panaa79

aad ton ant

ant ton anant

rasataa

manzil

naa hee koee

parraa

rangaan ch rafataar

bipanapreet, janam, panaa15

auparokat fikaraan de naal naal naveen panjaabee kavitaa panjaab de itihaas, mithihaas, lokadhaaraa ate bhoogol noo murr paribhaashat karake panjaabee manakh daa ik navaan sankalap sirajan dee chintaa vich vee hai| panjaab, panjaabee ate panjaabeeat daa ih sankalap naveen panjaabee kavitaa vich ik fikar vajon saahamane aa rihaa hai| is fikar deean parataan vibhin han| eeshavar diaal gauarr suramedaanee, paramaveer singh amrit velaa, devindar saifee dupahir daa safaa, haravindar panj nadeean daa geeta, kulavant singh garevaal teraa anbaraan ch naan likhiaa ih kaav pusatakaan daa fikar panjaabeeat noo punar paribhaashat karake virase deean unhaan visestaavaan noo ubhaaranaa hai jis vich panjaabee manakhataa dee nivekalee hond ate hasatee daa masalaa hai| inhaan dee visatrit charachaa lee ik vakhare nibandh dee zaroorat hai|

1990 ton baad dee naareevaadee panjaabee kavitaa

ddaa. minaakashee raatthauar

naareevaad ajoke yug dee vishavaviaapee naaree pakhee lahir, andolan te vichaaradhaaraa hai jis ne paitarik mul vidhaan noo chunauatee dindiaan naaree hond naal jurre anekaan hee savaalaan noo ubhaariaa hai| us naal samaaj vich naaree dee badaladee sathitee, drishattee te bhoomikaa daa prasn vee naven paripekh vich ubhar ke saahamane aaundaa hai jis naal pitaapurakhee samaaj de duhare maapadanddaan, pitaree mul vidhaan, ling bhed dee raajaneetee ate naaree man dee antarapeerraa noo taan noo samajhan dee ddoonghee chetanaa vee paidaa hundee hai| naareevaad dee naveen bhaashaa, abhiviakatee te anubhav de naveen paripekh ne naaree dee chup noo torriaa hai| jo naaree noo us dee vilakhan pachhaan dee sojhee karavaaundiaan us noo maanav vajon saveekrit kar baraabarataa daa adhikaar divaaun daa tarak vee pesh karadaa hai| naaree noo us de adhikaaraan ate hakaan prat jaagarook karan de naal savai hond te savai pachhaan dee ddoonghee chetanaa vee paidaa karadaa hai| naareevaad puras pradhaan samaaj vich aauarat noo ik vasat vajon saveekaare jaan dee raajaneetee te prashan chinh lagaaundaa naaree ute hon vaale daman, zulam te soshan daa virodh karadaa, aus dee aape dee chetanaa naal jaa jurradaa hai| naareevaadee chintakaan daa mananaa hai ki samaaj vich aauarat dee sathitee doosaraa uattahera vaalee hai| us de pichhe pitaree sataa dee raajaneetee vidamaan hai| is lee purash deean antaradristteean, maanataavaan, dhaaranaavaan te sandeh karanaa hor vee zarooree ho jaandaa hai| is sanbandhee savaal utthaaundiaan faraanseesee lekhikaa seemon d buaar aapanee mehatavapooran pusatak tthehe shechonad shena vich likhadee hai ki hun tak aauarat de baare vich purash ne jo kujh vee likhiaa hai| us noo gahiree sk dee dristtee naal parakhanaa is lee zarooree hai kiaunk uh peerrhat de baare vich peerrak dee dristtee ton likhiaa giaa hai| peerrhak puras peerrhat naaree de baare vich jo kujh vee likhegaa, aus vich uh aapane utapeerran te damanakaaree charatar utapeerrak noo surakhiat rakhan de udesh naal hee vichaaregaa| is lee seemon ne ih savaal utthaaeaa ki vidhaaeikaan, daarashanikaan, purohitaan, lekhakaan, kalaakaaraan, chintakaan te aalochakaan ne jo naaree chintan paidaa keetaa us te sandeh karan te us vich vidamaan antaravirodhaan daa vishalesn karan dee zaroorat hai| 1 seemon ne ih savaal vee utthaaeaa ki aj tak purash ne isataree de pakh jaan virodh vich jo vee likhiaa hai| us de baare vich gahiraa sk zaahar keetaa jaanaa chaaheedaa hai kiaunk likhan vaalaa niaan karataa ate aparaadhee donon hee hai| seemon ithe ih vee sapastt karadee hai ki puras ne sabhiataa de aad kaal ton hee aapanee sareerak skatee de kaaran aapanee srestthataa sathaapit kar lee| us ne jo mul

vidhaan gharriaa te jihanaan aacharanaan noo maanataa ditee, auh sabh us dee aapanee sahoolat de lee san| is ton pahilaan marad pradhaan kadaraan keemataan noo aauarat ne pahilaan kade is tarhaan chunauatee naheen ditee| kidhare kidhare viakateegat roop vich virodhee avaaz taan utthadee rahee par ik andolan de roop vich ih pahilee vaar hoeaa| bhaaven vakhovakhare deshaan vich is daa roop te prasang vakho vakharaa rihaa hai par naaree noo us de adhikaaraan te hakaan pratee jaagarookataa is daa mukh tteechaa rihaa hai|

jithon tak bhaarat varage pragateesheel des daa sanbandh hai, eithe naveen chetanaa daa aagaaz basateevaadee dauar vich hee hundaa hai| sutantarataa praapatee de sangharash vich kujh uch varag deean aauarataan dee hisedaaree dristteegochar hundee hai| madhavaragee aauarataan dee bhoomikaa ithe vee haasee te hee hai| jithon tak saahit daa masalaa hai, aus vich vee aauarat maradaan raaheen maradaan de drishatteekon ton hee chitaree gee hai| soofee kaav vich raabeean naan dee ik aauarat saaeiraa daa naan zaroor aaundaa hai| par us dee vee koee rachanaa naheen miladee| peero preman naan dee ik aauarat daa havaalaa kujh saahitak kirataan naal jroor miladaa hai| is tarhaan madhakaal vich aauarat dee smooleeat naamaatar hee najr aaundaa hai|

eitihaas de samache lekhe jokhe ton pataa chaladaa hai ki bahutaa karake aauarat haashee te hee rahee hai| is karake naareevaadee chintan ne vishav chintan vich kraanteekaaree itihaasak bhoomikaa nibhaaee hai| jis daa mukh aadhaar yoorap dee udayogik kraantee hee banadee hai| brittis raaj dee sathaapanaa samen udayogik karaantee de aaun naal aauarat noo kujh khulhaan praapat hoeean| uh vidiaa haasal karan lagee| jis de ivaz vajon us noo ghar dee chaar deevaaree ton baahar aaun de vee kujh mauake milade han| ajaadee ton baad vee sanvidhaanik tauar te bhaaven aauarat noo kujh hak zaroor praapat hunde han par samaajik sathiteean use tarhaan deean hon karake aauarat dee sathitee vich koee bahutaa parivaratan naheen aaeaa|

nateeje vajon kujh naaree lekhikaavaan naaree dee aavaaz ban ke ubharadeean han| aadhunik saahit dee har ik vidhaa aauaratamarad sanbandhaan deean jattilataavaan te samasiaavaan dee baat paaundee hai| jis vich panjaabee kavitaa vadhere ubharaven roop vich agarabhoomit hundee hai| 20veen sadee vich saadde kol ginatee deean kavatareean hee miladeean han par sadee de antale dahaakiaan vich aauarataan daa ik poore daa pooraa poor kavitaa de khetar vich pravesh karadaa hai| jihanaan vich manajeet ttivaanaa, manajeetapaal kauar, vaneetaa, paal kauar, manajeet indaraa, sharan makarr, sukhavindar amrit, surajeet sakhee, simaran gagan, bhupindar kauar preet, amarajeet ghunman, neeroo aseem, ameea kunvar, devindar dilaroop aad

anekaan kavitareean kaav sirajanaa vich saragaram hundeean han| ih kavitareean maradaaven pravachan duaaraa sathaapit aauaratapan dee paribhaashaa noo nakaaradiaan naveen pravachan sirajadeean han| uh aapanee chup noo zubaan dendeean devee te satee savataree hon ton inakaaree hundeean han| naaree har us mith noo vangaaradee te rad karadee hai jo pitarakee chihanakee prabandh us khilaaf varatadaa rihaa hai|

toon marad, eitihaas de paniaan

vedaan saamavedaan

tainoo taakat ditee

kar sakadaa toon laagoo chintan

par itihaas mithihaas hai jo

saare daa saaraa

mainoo nirabal karadaa|

manajeet paal kauar, ahisaas, panaa 83

bhaaratee mith sansaar bahutaa karake aauarat te khilaaf hee bhugatadaa hai| mith aapane hor prakaarajaan samet aauarat dee deh de naal chetan te avachetan noo niyantaran karan dee bhoomikaa vee nibhaaundee hai te is niyantaran noo pavatar te dhur daragaahee das ajihaa varataaraa banaa dendee hai, jis ute sandeh karanaa vee paap garadaaniaa jaandaa hai| jis de lee naaree kaav vich vidarohee sur ubharadee hai| jis adheen samakaalee naaree kaav vich naareevaadee biratee, soch, chetanaa de vibhin paasaar pesh hunde han| jithe us noo marad ik bherreea jaapadaa hai|

marad ik bhukhaa bherreea hai

jo tuhaanoo hor bherreean ton taan bachaa laindaa hai

par aap

pahilaan tuhaanoo aapane jabaarre ch attakaa ke

dasadaa haidekh toon kinee surakhiat hai.......

main tainoo khaandaa naheen|

manajeet ttivaanaa

marad pradhaan sataa pratee aapanaa prateekaram kavitaree paal kauar kujh is tarhaan ubhaaradee hai|

teraa beej maithon lahu lai ke ugiaa

te meraa hee adhikaaree ho giaa|

aauarat de samaajik keemat prabandh de santaap bhogan de naal maanasik santaap handtaaun de sankalap dee peshakaaree vee ajoke naaree kaav vich baakhoobee hoee miladee hai| jis daa pragattaavaa karadee kavitaree vaneetaa kujh is tarhaan de haav bhaav pes karadee hai|

rishatiaan dee paribhaasaa taanbas inee ku

saaree umar jadon uhanaan deanukool ho taan change

jad hee savai ch kujh jaagiaa us ne kujh aakhiaa|

eik aauarat sadeean ton peerrhee dar peerrhee pitarakee chihanakee prabandh deean varajanaavaan handtaaundee age ton age maan ton dhee ton fir agalee peerrhee taka pahunchaaundee hai| us daa havaalaa vee naaree kaav vich miladaa hai|

meree maan ne mainoo aakhiaa see,

siaaneean kurreean lukalak rahindeean

dhukh dhukh jiaundeean, jhukabak turadeean

naa uchaa boladeean naa uchaa hasadeean

sukhavindar amrita

eise tarhaan de sandarabh noo age toradee paal kauar aapane darad noo kujh is tarhaan biaan karadee hai| jis vich pitarakee sataa duaaraa pradaan keete ttukarriaan vich jiaunaa hee us dee honee hai| jithe us noo aapane bachapan de guaach jaan daa vee shikavaa hai|

ttukarre ikatthe karadee firadee haan aj kal

kise ttukarre ch jiaundee

te kite maradee firadee haan aj kal

kise ttukarre ch saah e, kise ch raah e, kise ch haa e|

par kithe hai uh guddee maasoom

baarish andare andar, panaa 56

eise lee uh naaree de sutantar asatatav dee kraantee sanbandhee kee savaal kharrhe karadee khidamataan vich doharaa teeharaa hundeean kurreean noo kamaleean kahindee hai|

chugadeean ne hathaan naal kandde,

te karadeean ne naven raahaan noo pairaan de mech

turadeean rahindeean, honeeananahoneean

thorrhaa jihaa failadeean te bahutaa bikharadeean

khidamataan ch doohareean teehareean hundeea,

kamaleean kurreean

baarish andare andar, panaa 20

rajaneesh oso aauarat de asatatav te hond sanbandhee ttipanee karade naaree aauar kraantee vich likhade han ki naaree kithe hai naaree daa koee asatitav hee naheen hai| maan daa asatitav hai, bhain daa asatitav hai, bettee daa asatatav hai, patanee daa asatitav hai, naaree daa koee asatitav naheen hai| naaree daa asatitav unaa hee hai jis maataraa vich purash naal sanbandhit hundee hai|

par aj dee aauarat sadeean ton chalee aa rahee is sansakaaree varajanaavaan dee gulaamee daa joolaa laah age vadhan lee tatapar hai| ih jazabaa sathaapatee pratee bagaavatee daa vee hai te sathiteean noo aapane anukool dtaalan daa vee| jis dee tarajmaanee sukhavindar amrit kujh is tareeke naal karadee hai|

kadam kadam te deevaaraan naal samajhauataa naa kareen,

aapaneean uddaareean noo pinjariaan kol gahine naa dharee|

toon maan naal jiaooee, maan naal mareen,

deevaaraan naal samajhauataa, haragiz naa kareen|

sukhavindar amrita

eise lee aj dee naaree chetanaa kise prahalaad lee sarran lee tiaar naa hundee naveen disahadiaan val vadhadee hai| jithe us daa aapanaa asatatav te aapanee hond hai|

eis ag duaale

parikaramaa karadee diaan aavaaz

sarr jaa holikaa|

bas toon hun sarr jaa holikaa

prahalaad noo musakaraan de

ki saare brahimandd noo musakaraan de

te toon hun sarr jaa holikaa

baarish andar andare panaa, 75

eise lee sukhavindar amrit is pitarakee prabandh deean akhauatee kadaraan keemataan te savaal karadee ihanaan ton azaad hon lee tatapar hai| hun naaree ajihe samaajik bandhanaan te akhauatee aadarashavaad ton mukat honaa lochadee hai jo ih pitarakee prabandh us ute thopadaa aaeaa hai| par kavitaree noo aas hai ki kade naa kade is gulaamee dee daasataan daa ant jroor hovegaa|

parinde ne jaa par tole barraa hee tarrapiaa rukharraa

te fir majaboor ho ke pinjare vich vatt giaa rukharraa

parinde udd hee jaande ne khizaa dee rut jad aaundee

te chhadd jaande ne roheean vich ikalaa sisakadaa rukharraa

samakaalee naaree kaav mahiz paranparaatamak mithak virase noo hee rad naheen karadaa sagon vasat manddee dee lorr tahit sirajeean jaa raheean naveean mithaan noo chunauatee dendaa naaree sarokaaraan noo us samajh naal vee jorradaa hai, jo vishaveekaran deean manddeevaadee rucheean galaimar dee duneean vich us de sanamakh paros raheean han| jekar aauarat noo vasat pravaan naheen taan us noo manddee de tarak naal vee sanvaad rachaaunaa hovegaa|

aaundeean ne uhaaapane, kise aapane

sundar chihare dee talaash ch .......

sundarataa jis noo sanbhaalan jaan andaron paidaa karan daa

naa val, naa sirarr, naa vakat

baarash andare andar, panaa 76

pitarakee lee aauarat hameshaan hee bhog dee vasat rahee hai ate pitarakee dee ih dhaaranaa hee bazaar dee taakat banadee hai| baajaar meeddee dee madad naal aauarat dee sundarataa de paimaaniaan noo faisn de naam te tabadeel kar rihaa hai| hun tak aauarat vee baazaar duaaraa nishachat keete sundarataa paimaaniaan vich fitt hon noo hee aapanee mukatee samajhadee rahee hai| par samakaalee panjaabee kavitaa is te prashan chinh lagaaundee parade pichhalee sachaaee noo ujaagar karadee hai| ise lee uh maradaaveen itihaasakaaree te mithihaasakaaree andar aapanee hasatee de nakaar noo pachhaanadee hoee is andar chhupee maradaaveen raajaneetee noo rad karadee hai|

eis tarhaan samakaalee panjaabee kavitaa naaree paripekh de anekaan sarokaaraan noo ubhaaradee naveen disahade sirajadee hai| us ne naaree dee chup noo bol dite han| varataare de khapiaan te vithaan vichon vee ik paatth ubharadaa hai| jis vichon ik punar paatth sirajat hundaa hai| is de khapiaan te vithaan vichon vee naaree dee avaaz ubharadee najr aaundee hai| amareekaa vich profaisar te bangaal vich jamee palee gaaeitaree chakaravaratee sapeevaak suaal ubhaaradee hai chhan ttehe suba alatteran sapeaka jis daa javaab banadaa hai ki haan aj de haasheeaagat varag bol sakade han| jis adheen naareevaadee panjaabee kavitaa maradaaven pravachan duaaraa sathaapit aauaratapan deean paribhaashaavaan noo torradee hai| uh devee, duragaa te lakashamee dee mith dee raajaneetee ton baahar aa aapaneean maanasik lorraan noo

zubaan dendee hai| is kavitaa vich naaree har us mith noo vangaaradee te rad karadee hai jo hun tak us de khilaaf ik raajaneetee rachade rahe han| uh marad pradhaan samaaj duaaraa banaae pinjare naal do hath hon ton vee gurej naheen karadee|

toon inhaan shikariaan de vaasate ban ke chunotee rahi

jhuke kiaun sir teraa neeveen teree paravaaz kiaun hove

eih mar mar ke jiaunaa chhadd bagaavat kar ke ttakar lai

tere hise dee duneean te kise daa raaj kiaun hove|

sukhavindar amrit patajharr vich pungarade pate

eise tarhaan dee vangaar manajeet indaraa dee kavitaa vichon miladee hai|

main aapane aap chunaangee, hun taan manzal meree

mere pair bananage, tereean pairraan de vich reh ke

hauanke haave kujh namoshee, seh chukee haan

aapane pairaan hetth aapanee dharatee lorraan

sir mere te meraa hee aakaash hovegaa|

pooratee apooratee

lorr hai aauarat noo aapanee shakatee noo pahichaanan dee| aapane pratee jaagarook ho, aapanee hond te asatitavav noo pachhaanan dee kiaunk naaree andar bahut taakat hai| par is naal us daa makasad marad noo nakaaranaa naheen sagon manakh sirajat sanchaar prabandhaan vichon maanavee pakhaan noo ubhaar ke ajihe samaaj dee sirajanaa karanaa hai, jis vich aauarat marad samaan dharaatal te kharrhe hon|

sahaaeik pusatakaan

1. charanajeet kauar ddaa., naaree chetanaa, lokageet prakaashan, chanddeegarrh, 1999

2. prabhaa khetaan ddaa., eisataree upekashitaa, hind paakett bukas praaeevett limittadd, naveen dilee, 2002

3. raakesh kumaar, naareevaadee vimarash, aadhaar prakaashan, panchakoolaa, 2011

4. paramajeet kauar, naareevaad te saahit sameekhiaa, aab pabaleekeshanaz, samaanaa, 2013

5. pravachan, kahaanee goshattee ank, janavareemaarach, 2011

noorakaav jalaavatanaan dee vaapasee

ddaa. sukhadev singh

sutindar singh noor panjaabee saahit sirajan ate saahitachintan de khetaraan vich peshapes rihaa| nirasandeh uh sirajanaatamik aoorajaa naal labolab bhariaa lekhak see, par us dee rachanaatamikataa te pratibhaa saahitak jathedaaree ate saahit dee sataasiaasat de sikhar te ttike rahin dee horr vich vee kharach hundee rahee| us daa binb naveen pratibhaa ate aoorajaavant lekhakaan noo utashaahit karan vaale udaarachit paarakhoo daa vee hai ate saahit dee sataasiaasat de skateesaalee matthaadhees daa vee| bhaaven saahit sirajan ate chintan us de karam khetar rahe ate dohaan vich hee us ne aapanee maualik pachhaan vee banaaee, par kaavasirajanaa val us ne banadee tavajon naheen ditee| sarasavatee us ute khaasee miharabaan rahee, par sataa shataranz daa moharaa bane saaeir ne kaavadevee val pitth karee rakhee| duniaavee te saahit dee sataasiaasat de jhameliaan ton uchaatt ho ke uh kavitaa dee daragaah val paratadaa taan rihaa, par us ne kavitaa naal aapanee pahilee vafaa naa paalee| kaav dee hondavidhee auana ttologe, kaav shilap, sanchaar samarathaa ate kaavabhaashaa de suhaj aad sidhaantak masaliaan pratee uh bahut suchet see| kaav daa rasikachit paatthak hon de naate usadee rasaaee panjaabee lokakaav ton lai ke visv dee kalaaseekal te aadhunik kavitaa tak see| us dee nazar visv de vakh vakh khitiaan te vakh vakh jubaanaan vich rachee gee kalaasakee kavitaa te samakaalee kavitaa upar rahee| mahaanagaree jeevan de rujheviaan te kamaan de gaarrhamaarrh vichon uh kavitaa de tarajme le samaan kadt laindaa| us ne visv padharee khiaatee vaale besumaar kaveean dee kavitaa de panjaabee ch tarazame keete| vishav kavitaa de visaal adhiain ne kaavasuhaj baare us dee soojh noo nikhaaran vich, nirasandeh mehatavapooran bhoomikaa nibhaaee| rasik kaavapaatth te chetan kaavashaasataree hon de naal naal uh suchet kaavaabhiaasee sirajana vee hai| usane ghatt par kaav suhaj de miaaraan pakhon umadaa kavitaa likhee| chaar dahaakiaan de arase vich us de keval panj maualik kaavasangreh chhape| us daa paletthaa kaavasangreh birakh nipatare 1969 vich chhaape charrhiaa fer us ne lanbee chup saadh lee| panjaabee yooneevarasittee pattiaalaa ch parrhan, parrhaaun, aarazee mulaajmat te barakhaasatagee ton baad uh mahaanagaree vich jaa ttikiaa| dilee yooneevarasittee ch parraaun te khoj de rujheviaan kaaran uh kavitaa likhan valon avesalaa rihaa| panjaabee aalochanaa de dilee sakool de sidhaantakaaraan vichon uh ddaa. haribhajan singh noo chhadd ke sabh ton vadh pratibhaashaalee, vaadeesanvaadee te

aoorajaavaan sirajak see| eikatee faravaree risaale de sanpaadan 197378 ee. raaheen us ne panjaabee saahit chintan ate saahit sirajan vich bauadhik halachal te visafott varagee sathitee paidaa keetee| us ne khud ikabaal keetaa hai ki meree pahilee muhabat taan kavitaa naal hee rahee, par adhiaapan ne mainoo aalochanaa deean zinmevaareean naal jorr ditaa| naal naal turadiaan tak, naal naal turadiaan panaa 9 kavitaa usade avachetan tak dasatak dindee raheen par uh ttheek ikee varhiaan baad aapanaa doojaa kaavasangrahikavitaa dee jalaavatanee lai ke paatthakaan de sanamukh hoeaa| is arase dauaraan us de do anuvaadat kaavasangreh chhape; chairee de ful japaanee kavitaa daa tarazamaa hai ate sooraj de maseehaa kaav sangreh vich samaajavaadee desaan de chaar vidarohee kaveean dee kavitaa daa anuvaad hai| veehaveen sadee de aakharee dahaake vich sutindar singh noor de do kaavasangreh uparothalee chhape; saradal de aar paar 1995 ee ch ate maualasaree 2000 ee. vich| naal naal turadiaan us dee samachee kavitaa daa sangreh hai jo 2000 ee. vich chhapiaa| us daa panjavaan kaavasangrahiaa mere naal galaan kar 2009 ee. vich chhapiaa|

sutindar singh noor de chintan ate kaavasirajanaa daa kendaree sootar sathaapan vaadee maanasikataa ate nishachitataavaadee detteraminisatta vichaaradhaaraavaan ton vidaroh hai| us ne aapanee kaavayaataraa de mudtale parraa te is vichaar noo aatamasaat kar liaa see ki pravaanit vichaaraan te sathaapit sidhaantaan dee rauashanee vich manakhee jeevan de bahuparatee jattil ate davandaatamak varataare noo samajhiaa naheen jaa sakadaa| mariyaadaa poojak te reetapaal dristtee sirajanaatamikataa lee vaaraa naheen khaandee| sach de mutalaasee lee bebaak, belaag ate butashikan honaa laazamee hundaa hai| sirajan lee dibadristtee naheen; jeevan daa anubhav ate vivekee rachanaatamikataa vadhere kaaragar hundee hai| ise lee noor daa kaavapaatar kise dibajot jaan teesaree akh dee thaan munakar hon dee kaafaraanaa reet dee vakaalat karadaa hai

main teejee akh daa ichhak naheen haan

main do akhaan naal hee brahimandd dee

har leelhaa noo vekh sakadaa haan

main teejee akh dee ichhaa karaangaa|

jadon saahaven aae sach ton ddaraangaa

jaan mereean de akhaan chon

jot sau jaavegee

te saahaven aae sach ton ho ke munakar

es jeevan vich ik mauat maraangaa|

birakh nipatare

brahimanddee varataariaan te manakhee jeevan de bahuparatee sach noo sathaapanaavaadee, reetapooj te ikakendaravaadee drishattee apanaa ke naheen samajhiaa jaa sakadaa| aapane samen deean tthos hakeekataan ate unhaan andarale davandaan noo dekhan, samajhan ate pragattaaun lee jithe lekhak daa vivekasheel honaa zarooree hai, authe us kol roorrh ho chukeean bodeean maanataavaan noo vangaaran vaalee sanghaarakee rachanaadrishattee vee honee chaaheedee hai| sathaapit vichaaradhaaraavaan te bhaaroo naitik mulaan dee keel vich navasirajanaa sanbhav hee naheen hundee| saahit sirajanaa haakamaan de vichaaradhaarak galabe hegemone, bhaaroo sabhiaachaar kadaraprabandh te katthor varajanaavaan pratee lekhak dee beparateetee daa mataa hundaa hai| kavee noor anusaar saahit sirajanaa enachounatter hai; haakamaan de galabe te sabhiaachaarak gheraabandee varajanaavaan dee hinsaa de kufar de khilaaf kavee te us dee maaraft peerrat lokaaee daa ftavaa haakam mel te usade pichhalagaan dee nazar ch lok pakhee kalaakavitaa kufar hundee hai te kaveekalaakaar naa bakhashe jaan yog kaafraa sutindar singh noor, damanakaaree samaajaan vich kavee de sanghaarakee rachanaadharam ate usadee honee dohaan laae khaasaa suchet hai

main krishan haan, arajan naheen haan

main jaanadaa haan

jis ne mere teeraan daa ddang khaanaa hai

main sach dee khaatar bahut niramohiaa haan

main jaanadaa haan

saahamanee paal vich khale

kujh mere mitar vee ne

te kujh uh jinhaan daa satikaar

mereean akhaan ch hai

par sach dee khaatar

main aapane teeraan noo kinjh aakh sakadaa haan

ki ihanaan te ddang naa maaro

main jaanadaa haan har yug

eik mahaanbhaarat chon langhadaa hai

dharatee te kan kan noo rakat de naal rangadaa hai

te is mahaanbhaarat lee hee

main baar baar abhishaap daa

zahir pee ke maradaa haan

birakh nipatare

sutindar singh noor ate us de samakaalee sirajakaan vishes karake panjaabee kaveean ne aapane yug de mahaanbhaarat noo kiven samajhiaa hai jaan kee uh damanakaaree poonjeevaadee vivasathaa dee leelaa noo kinaa ku samajh ate samajhaa sake han nirasandeh, eih prashan bahut mehatavapooran han| noor aapanee kavitaa vich kalaasirajanaa de is buniaadee masale noo baar baar utthaaundaa hai ki ikahireeantimapakhee dristtee, sathaapanaavaadee vateere ate nishachitaavaadee vidhee apanaa ke zindagee deean hakeekataan dee thaah naheen paaee jaa sakadee| is sandarabh vich us deean najmaamuhabat ch, chup daa pul saradal de aar paara, eih raah kithe jaandaa hai ate juganoo maualasaree parrheean jaa sakadeean han| chup daa pul nazam daa kaavapaatar rahindaa hai ki aau kujh vee prabhaashit naa karee, sabh kujh aprabhaashit hee rahin deeee| paribhaasaavaan, sidhaant, vichaar shabad sabh manakhee ristiaan te zindagee de sachaan noo seemat karade han, arathaan noo banh maarade han| eih raah kithe jaandaa hai nazar chon ih dhunee ubharadee hai ki zindagee sidhesaratorr raah vaang saral naheen| jrooree naheen ki har raah kise manjil tak jaandaa hove| manakhee jeevan ttedteeamedteean pagaddanddeean varagaa amak safar hai| juganoo nazam vich noor manakhee jeevan de rehas noo jagabujh jagabujh karade ttahine de roopak raaheen samajhaaundaa hai| manakh de jeevan vich kujh vee sathir ate antim sach varagaa naheen hundaa| sach dee lishakor kidharon vee pai sakadee hai| samen ate desakaal de fer naal paribhaasaavaan, sidhaantaan, vichaar, raah ate sach de arath badalade rahinde han| pramaan vajon noor dee ih nazam parrhee jaa sakadee hai

main geetaan vaang

aakaash ch utthadeean

abaaleelaan farran lagadaa haan

toon aakhadee eeiaun naa kar

eih azaad hee changeean lagadeean han

main jhunddaan ch jagade

juganooaan noo

hathaan ch farran lagadaa haan

toon aakhadee en, eiaun naa kar

eih saare de saare mar jaanage

main kinamin kaneean de baad

ret te jaandeean

sooheean cheechavahutteean deean

pairraan dee banadee janzeeree

sulajhaaun lagadaa haan

toon mere naal turadiaan

aakhadee eneiaun naa kar

kee vaar ih raah ulajh vee jaande ne

main muhabat ch bahut galateean karadaa haan

te toon mainoo samajhaaun lagadee en baar baar

saradal de aar paara

aazaad uddadeean abaabeelaan noo farrhanaa, juganooaan de chaanan noo kaid karanaa, cheechavahutteean dee pairraan ton banadee zanjeer noo sidhapadhare raah ch badalan daa yatan karanaa ate zindagee de safar noo banebanaae raah vaang samajhanaa aad saare chihan manakh dee sathaapanaavaadee te ik kendaravaadee manobiratee de soochak han, jo noor dee kavitaa vich kaatte hetth hai|

nirasandeh, sutindar singh noor vishav padhar upar vaapar rahe raajasee, aarathik ate sabhiaachaarak varataariaan ate unhaan ch aa rahe jattil parivaratanaan baare suchet see, par usane khud siaasee muhaavare vaalee kavitaa rachan ton gurez keetaa| raajasee padhar ute us daa sanvaad burajuaa vichaaradhaaraavaan naal vee see ate samaajavaadee kainp vichale desaan dee ik kendaravaadee siaasat naal vee see, jo bahuvachanee sanvaad dee thaan sataa te kendareekaran upar hee ttek rakh rahee see| uh burajuaa lokatantar de parade uhale vaapar rahee raajasee hinsaa te daman baare vee fikaramand see ate samaajavaadee deshaan vich samaanaantar vichaaraan ate pragattaave dee aazaadee upar lag rahe pratibandhaan te manaaheean baare vee chintat see| us ne samaajavaadee kainp de desaan vichale unhaan vidarohee kaveean noo anuvaad keetaa, jiharre prolotaaree ddikattettaraship de sanaatanee maarakasee sootar de samaanaantar bahuvachanee sabhiaachaar te sanvaad sirajan de haamee san| noor de chintan ate kaavasirajanaa daa bal har tarhaan de vichaaradhaarak galabe, sanaatanee bandhej te ghuttan, sabhiaachaarak raashattaravaad de daabe, raajasee hinsaa, sansathaaee daman ate mariyaadaagat varajanaavaan de virodh upar hai| us dee kavitaa ate chintan dee sur sanvaadee vee hai ate pratirodhee vee| us ne samakaalee pragateevaadee, prayogavaadeeaadhunikataavaadee ate jujhaar kaavadhaaraa dee nishachitataavaadee te antimapapee dristtee noo vee chunauatee ditee ate us kaavavidhee noo vee nakaariaa jiharree sidhe sanbodhan, auchee sur ate raittarik upar ttek rakh rahee see| ih kaavavidhee kaav bhaashaa de suhaj naalon vadh kaav de sandes baare fikaramand see| uche bhaasnee sur te raittarik dee thaan noor ne aapanee kavitaa vich dheemee kattaakhasee mudaraa ate sanketak bhaasaa deean kaavajugataan apanaaeean| us ne

panjaabee kavitaa noo raajasee muhaavare dee muthaajee ton mukat karake naveen kaava bhaashaa sirajee, jis dee ttek sanketak kattaakhashee mudaraa ate vakarokatee sirajanaa upar hai| sidhe kathan dee thaan vakrokatee kath vich ttedt paidaa karake kaava bhaasaa noo vadhere bhaareegoree, sanchaaramulak, ramaneek ate suhajavaadee banaaundee hai| sutindar singh noor daa kaavapaatar pooravalee pragateevaadee te jujhaaravaadee kavitaa de naaeik vaang naa taan samaaj sabhiaachaarak varataare baare sidheean siaasee ttipaneean karadaa hai ate naa hee paiganbaree mudaraa ch kaavapaatthak noo naseehat karadaa hai| noor lee kaavasirajanaa naa naseehat naamaa hai, naa koree shabad kalol| uh kaavapaatthak dee sirajanaatamikataa, suhajabodh ate samajh ute khaasaa bharosaa rakhadaa hai| uh paatthak noo sirajak vaang hee arath utapaadan dee ik saragaram dhir samajhadaa hai| ise karake us daa kaava paatar kahindaa hai, ki

kujh galaan akhaan ch

akhaan paa ke hee karan vaaleean hundeean ne

dekheen pal ku akh naa jhapakee

saaree dee saaree kathaa bikhar jaaegee|

kavitaa dee jalaavatanee

kaavabhaashaa vaang sutindar singh noor ne kaav dee ik asalon naveen vidhee vee eezaad keetee| us deean sanketak te laghooaakaaree najmaan daa dris baaharon barraa saral te ikahire jihe juse vaalaa jaapadaa hai, par arath gauarav de saar esasenache pakhon barraa jattil hundaa hai| sanketakachihanakee bhaashaa te aam galakath dee mudaraa ch sookham chhuhaan duaaraa usareean us deean nazamaan arathaan pakhon door tak maar karan vaaleean hundeean han| vakrokatee sirajanaa duaaraa uh baahare saral jihe disade drish vich anekaan arathateh te dhuneean noo paidaa kar dindaa hai| us daa sirajiaa kaavadris inaa naattakee ho nibarradaa hai ki us vichon jindagee de vaddere te ganbheer masaliaan deean goonjaananugoonjaan sunaaee den lagadeean| pramaan valon us dee kavitaakade kade achaanak parrhee jaa sakadee hai

kade kade achaanak

eik gaddee dee cheek sunadee hai

ddabiaan dee khahikheh khachakhach

pattarreean te khahin dee aavaaz

sochadaa haan pataa naheen

kis ddabe vich kine ku aadamee ne

kee karade kee sochade ne

khabare saare de saare ddabe

retapatharaan de bhare hon

achaanak aaundaa hai

eik baal bhaibheet

te aakhadaa hai

ankala

saaree dee saaree gaddee

bharee hoee hai

ttainkaan, fauajaan te topaan de naal

tak rahe han uh ghooraghoor

te meree gend gunm gee hai

aus gaddee de paheean vichaale

chalo naa paleez|

labh diau zaraa|

maualasaree

ttainkaan, topaan te fauajeean naal bharee gaddee samaan de vaddere jeean lee ddaraaunee hai, dahishat daa maahaual sirajadee hai, par baal aapanee khedd vich masat hai| is nazam chon ih dhunee ubharadee hai ki manakh de masaliaan noo pulisa fauaj jaan hathiaaraan naal naheen sulajhaaeaa jaa sakadaa| kheddaan ch masat bache dee maasoomeeat te saadagee vadderiaan dee siaanap ate damanakaaree haakamaan dee dahishatee taakat naalon vadhere kaaragar hai| hathiaar ate fauaj gend dee nisabat nigoone han| khedd ch masat nirabal jihaa bachaa vadhere balashaalee jaapadaa hai| vakrokatee dee sirajanaa duaaraa kavee noor ne maasoom te nirabal dhir noo kendaree sathitee vich liaa kharrhaa keetaa hai| barasaat vich ik jhugee kolon langhadiaan maualasaree naamee nazam vich vee noor iho vidhee varatadaa hai| jhugee ch rahin vaale bache barasaat vich nahaaunde zindagee daa aanand maanade han| gaaunde te nachade bache kolon langh rahe profaisar noo jashan ch shaamil hon lee sulhaa maarade han| uh jhugee dee chondee chhat te rottee dee thurr ton befikar han| madh varagee profaisar zindagee de jsn chon baahar kharrhaa hai, asalon abhaj te fikaramand ih nazam panjaabee lok kaavaroop thaal dee shailee ch likhee gee hai| ih baala geet mahaanagaree jeevan, aupabhogee sabhiaachaar ate madhavaragee bande dee gareebee upar kattaakhash hai| haasee ute sutte te samaaj chon bedakhal keete jhugeean vaale bache madhavaragee mahaanagaraan de bande naalon jeevan de vadhere nerre han| sutindar singh noor vakrokatee sirajanaa duaaraa baaharo saral disade drish noo jattil bhaava

bodh vaalaa hee naheen banaaundaa, sagon arathaan vich ulatt fer karake kaavabhaashaa vich chamatakaar paidaa karadaa hai|

sutindar singh noor sataadhaaree dhiraan de vichaaradhaarak galabe, raajasee hinsaa sabhiaachaarak raashattaravaad te usade daabe ate har tarhaan de sansathaaee bandhej noo vibhin dharaatalaan te vangaaradaa hai| uh haakamaan de vichaaradhaarak galabo ate sataa de daman deean sanvaahak sansathaavaan dee nishaanadehee hee naheen karadaa, sagon unhaan noo kaatte hetth rakhadaa hai ate unhaan de sanbhaavee badal vee sujhaaundaa hai, par ih kam sanketak roop vich karadaa hai| us dee kavitaa vich raaj darabaar, des, dharam, ghar, rishate, mahiboob, rab, kaanoon ate muhabat aad shabad aapanee puraanee kunj laah ke asalon naven arathaan vich saahamane aaundaa hai| raaj darabaar bande noo surakhiaa, niaan te jeenabeen daa avasar naheen dindaa, sagon us ton us dee khudee dee balee mangadaa hai| darabaar de saae hetth khudakushee karake hee rahinaa sanbhav hai| khudakusee ghar manakh deean sanbhaavanaavaan noo banh maaradaa hai, eih bande noo nijapaal te vasatapaal banaaundaa hai| ghar dee chaar deevaaree ch ghiriaa bandaa ret hoee jaandaa hai| pramaan valon noor deean gharaan ate enee vee uddeek naa karo nazamaan parrheean jaa sakadeean han

changaa hai gharaan ch vasanaa

par ene vee gharaan ch naa vas laau

ki vasanaa ghar ch ghar kar jaave

te tuseen gharaan ton paar vasade

gharaan noo bhul jaau|

saradal de aar paara

ausaradaa hai ghar

eittaanpatharalohaaseemintt

kon akonaandarale ving valeven

sooraj val khulhade duaar

langhadee pauanaandar baahar

naal heeausaradaa jaandaa hai binb

sabh ret hai sabh mittee hai|

maualasaree

ghar, saradal, des, jooh, raah ate dharam sabh manakh noo seemat karade han| us vichalee karataaree sanbhaavanaa noo mittee karade han, ausadee pachhaan seemat ate dhoomal karade han| burajuaa sataa siaasat des, kauam, raashattar, dharam, khetaree

sabhiaachaarak samoohaan ate ghattaginateean dhaaramik, eethanak, bhaashaaee ghatta ginateean noo mohariaan vajon varatadee hai| dharam, desh, raashattar, kauam ate sabhiaachaarak vidhaan manakh dee shanaakhat, surakhiataa te aazaadee de jsan naheen banade ate naa hee us deean maanavee sanbhaavanaavaan te karataaree shakatee de vikaas daa jreea banade han, sagon is de ulatt us noo damanakaaree sataa daa piaadaa banaaunde han| bhaaratee sanvidhaan ate sattett de lokataantrik, saikoolar dharamanirapekha ate lokamukhee hon daa daavaa karan vaalee bhaaratee burajuaa siaasat ne dhaaramikakhetareebhaashaaee ghattaginateean naal kiho jihaa amaanavee salook keetaa ate sabhiaachaarak raasttaravaad de lukaven ejandde ne bhaarat de sanghee dtaanche noo kiven dtaah laaee, noor is sanvedanasheel siaasee prasn noo aapanee kattaakhasee mudaraa vaalee nazam mere desh vich einj roopamaan karadaa hai

mere des vich

har vesavaa daa naan hundaa e

salamaa, rukhasaanaa, husainaa, aalamaaraa

te uh takadee tuhaadde val

jiven kise itihaasak lutt dee khimaan mangadiaan

hun aap lutte jaan dee daahavat de rahee hove

main dushiant de shir

gazalaan daadaraa sunadaa

husainaa daa enaa vaakaf ho giaa saan

maithon achete aakhiaa giaa

bas gaaundeean ne

taan ih musalamaan kurreean

eih sunadiaan husainaa bol utthee

naheen naheen

main taan panjaab ton ujarree jamanaa haan

aauah rukamanee te aauah meeraa hai| kavitaa dee jalaavatanee

eis kavitaa chon ih dhunee ubharadee hai ki is kathit saikoolaradesh vich ghattaginateean, dalit aauarataan, kasabeeankalaakaaraan te kaamiaan dee haiseeat vesavaa vaalee hai| jiharraa des dheean, kalaakaaraan te dhaaramik ghattaginateean noo surakhiaa, aazaadee te niaan naheen de sakadaa ate unhaan dee shanaakhat noo madholadaa hai, saikoolar, lokataantrik ate lokamukhee raashattar hon daa daavaa kiven kar sakadaa hai vakrokatee dee jugat raaheen ddaa. noor ne arathaan vich ulattafer karake ajihaa chamatakaar keetaa hai ki des kotthaa jaapan lag piaa hai| des,

lokaan daa hai ki haakamaan te sataan de dalaalaan daa eih prashan noor dee kavitaa de kendar ch rahindaa hai| des kinhaa daa haisataa de lalasaae haakamaan daa, jo raajasee taakat hathiaaun lee dhaaramik, khetaree te bhaashaaee ghattaginateean noo dabaa ke sabhiaachaarak raasttaravaad dee sauarree siaasat kar rahe han jaan gaira mulakee samajhee jaan vaalee laahauaran panjaaban maan daa, jo mulakon baahar baitthee panjaab te aavaam dee khair mangadee hai| noor dee nazam laahauar dee sarrak te jaandiaan dee ramaz barree gahiree hai saaddaa maaeebaap kauan hai sochanaa banadaa hai

laahauar dee sarrak te jaandiaan

eik budtee panjaaban

raah rok laindee

burakaa hattaa ke puchhadee

putara kee haal e panjaab daa

main aakhadaa

ttheekatthaak e maan

budtee panjaaban aakhadee

naa putaraan koraa jhootth naa bola

kavitaa dee jalaavatanee

vishav dee inakalaabee kavitaa noo deevaanagee dee had tak piaaran vaalaa, suchet paatthak te anuvaadak hon de naate noor ih samajhadaa see ki sidhe raajasee muhaavare vaalee kavitaa naalon piaarakavitaa vadhere prabhaavashaalee te asara paa hundee hai| paabalo nairoodaa, faiz ahimad faij ate mahimood daravesh dee piaara kavitaa us daa rol maaddal see, par noor dee piaarakavitaa dee praapatee ih hai ki us ne muhabat de theem noo unamaadee rumaans ton mukat keetaa| us dee piaarakavitaa unamaadee aindarikataa kaamukataa te deheezasan dee kavitaa naheen, sagon aapane dauar de ahim siaasee te samaajasabhiaachaarak sarokaaraan noo mukhaatib hai| ih kavitaa naaree deh de sauandaray te kaamakaamanaavaan dee lanpatt poorateeapooratee tak seemit naheen| saradal de aar paar ate maualasaree kaava sangreh deean piaar kavitaavaan vich noor muhabat jaan aauaratamarad de rishate dee paranparak paribhaasaa noo hee badalan daa yatan karadaa hai| noor naa gurabakhas singh preetalarree de us preet falasafe daa haamee hai, jo manakh dee prakiratak andarik khich noo khaaraj karake roohaanee piaar dee vakaalat karadaa hai ate naa hee suchavaadee naitikataa dee duhaaee dindaa hai| saradal de aarapaar nazam vich auh piaar ate sanaatanee drishattee noo rad karadaa hai, jo piaar noo choree daa rishataa samajhadee hai| do vakhare gharaan ch vasan vaale viaahevare aauarat marad

vee piaar kar sakade han| saradal daa chihan paranparak drishattee dee seemaa val sanket hai

main tainoo ghar dee saradal de

paar uddeek daa

toon mainoo anek vaar

ghar tak chhaddan aaundee

gunagunaaundeelahilahaaundee

nattakhatt atthakheleean karadee

teraa ang ang jaagadaa

kuchh puchhadeekujh dasadee

ghar deean pauarreean ton pahilaanaakhadee

baakee ttaileefon te sahee

saradal de aar paara

muhabat nazam ch uh kahindaa hai ki piaar audaaseean te jaan te dumel tak fail jaan, varagaa karam hai| muhabat aatamavigaas daa amal hai, eih manakh noo shidatee saanjh de ahisaas naal bharapoor karadee hai, eih premeean vich rab honatheen dee aasathaa paidaa karadee hai| is saadde andarale nija paal te vasatapaal shakhas noo samaajak saanjh dee tand vich banadaa hai| is sandarabh vich noor deean najamaan main jadon; main jadon teraa ishak simar rihaa saan ate toon jadon mainoo milee vichaaran yog han

main jadon teraa ishak simar rihaa saan

taan achaanak brahimandd navakhandd

vigasade te failade nazar aae

chetanaa de kingare bane ddige te fir bane

main dekhiaa tereean dhur ddoonghaanaan ch

auhee brahimandd fail rihaa see

auh navakhandd vigas rahe san|

maualasaree

tuseen puchhade ho ate rishate dee paribhaasaa saradal de aar paar nazamaan vich noor aauaratamarad sanbandhaan dee panraparak paribhaashaa noo nakaaradaa hai| parivaar te viaah de pravaanit riste samaaj valon taan saveekaare hoe te vaidh hunde han, par ih ziaadaatar sanvedanaavee sek ton vihune hunde han; muhabat daa rishataa apravaanit par sdat bharapoor hundaa hai| naitik mariaadaa dee raamakaar te

buniaadee rishatiaan daa tauak aauaratamarad sanbandhaan dee jazabaatee garamaahatt noo sun karadaa hai|

sutindar singh noor de piaarakaav vich aauarat dee haasheeaagat hond lee zinmevaar purassataa kendarit siaasat dee nisaanadehee vee hoee hai| pitara sataa kendar sabhiaachaaraan vich parivaaraan ate viaah deean sansathaavaan aauarat noo aseelan daa kam karadeean han| parivaar ate viaah dee mariyaadaa aauarat lee niraa chhalaavaa hundee hai| purashasataa dee siaarat aauarat de jananee sirajana roop noo pichhe sutt ke us de kaamanee saroop noo aauarat dee pachhaan banaa dindaa hai| uh sejasukh te dehajashan de saadhan tak sungarrasimatt jaandee hai| noor dee kavitaa vich aauarat de kaamanaavant laghoo roop naalon usade sirajan vaale viraatt aape dee mahimaa vadhere hoee hai| us daa kaavapaatar kade siv vaang viraatt leelhaa rachaaun vaalee paaro noo talaashadaa hai ate kade premikaa hathon haar jaan dee zid karadaa hai| auh puchhadee hai naamee nazam vich noor marad de jetoo te hinsak roop noo ulattaa dindaa hai| paaro naamee kavitaa vich kavee aauarat de nirabal hon dee mith noo visathaapat kar dindaa hai| aauarat de sashakateekaran de sirajak roop dee ih chetanaa hee noor de piaarakaav daa haasil hai

paaro

toon kade mainoo hee mook karadee

mere hee angaan te dhamaal paaundee

viraattalheelaa ch

taanddav saakaar karadee

khanddaanbrahimanddaan tak

bijaleean rauand suttadee en

main tainoo hee talaashadaa

baar baar paaro

toon aje vee das

meree kee lagadee e

maualasaree

sankhep vich sutindar singh noor dee kavitaa bedakhal kar dite ge ate aapanee hee dharatee te jalaavatanee bhogade bandiaan dee vaapasee naa ahid hai| us de kaavapaatar dee gharaan ton tur ge mitaraan noo parat aaun dee salaah mahiz kavee daa supanaa naheen, eitihaas valon paaee gee vidt daa takaazaa hai

es ton pahilaan ki

bisheear samiaan noo ddang jaan

nigal jaan tuhaaddeean pairraan de nishaan

te tuseen bahut door nikal ge

bhul jaau pagaddanddeean, joohaan te banere

gharaan ton tur ge mitaron

hun parat vee aau|

kavitaa dee jalaavatanee

beshak noor dee kavitaa sankattamochan te kise maseehaaee karam daa dtaaeea naheen karadee, par usane haneriaan khilaaf juganoo vaalee reet nibhaaee hai

door tak failee siaah raat

birachhaanboottiaan de parachhaaviaan noo nigal ke

veeraan sarrakaan te kunddal maar ke baitthee hai

main band kamare dee baaree kholhadaa

te dekhadaa haan juganoo

jo hanere noo cheeradaa paar jaa rihaa hai|

kavitaa dee jalaavatanee

manamohan daa kaavapravachan

ddaa. yogaraaj

manamohan dee kavitaa noo samajhan lee pahilaa dhiaan taan usadee kaava bhaashaa te hee jaandaa hai| kaavabhaashaa chon langhake hee paatthak ne isade arath karane hunde han| is pakh ton manamohan dee kavitaa paatthak daa imatihaan laindee hai| par paatthak isanoo samajh lavegaa, eisadee garanttee uh aap vee naheen laindaa| sagon uh taan aapanee kavitaa dee is vilakhanataa ton khud chetan hai| ise lee uh aapane kaavashaasatar baare kee sankhep ate bhaavapooran ttipaneean karadaa hai| inhaan vichon uh ttee. ais. eeleeatt deean jinhaan sataraan noo neel kantth kaava sangreh vich ankit karadaa hai unhaan sataraan naal manamohan dee kavitaa baare gal shuroo keetee jaa sakadee hai| uh ankit karadaa hai, paatthak noo samajhaaunaa jaa sach vikhaaunaa kavitaa dee pahunch ton baaharale vishe han| kavitaa samajhaaun ton pahilaa vee pale pai sakadee hai| asapasttataa kavitaa de sauandaray saasatar daa anakharr ag hai| ih kavitaa daa eemaan ho kiaunk kavitaa dee bhaasaa samarathan dee bhaasaa naheen hundee| kavitaa dee hond hee kiaunk is gal te ttikee hundee hai ki uh saadhaaran bhaasaa naheen hundee, saadhaaran viaakaran de niyamaan noo torr ke hee kaavabhaashaa dee kansattrakasn hundee hai, age is kansattrakashan ne aapane vises itihaasak, samaajik ate raajaneetak sandarabhaan chon anekaan vividh roop grahin karane hunde han| ttee. ais. eeleeatt vee kavitaa de roopaakaar baare jiharre vichaar pesh karadaa hai, auh asal vich vishes kavitaa de vises kaavasaasatar dee talaas see| ih talaas pachhamee paranparaa vich romaanttik prageetaatamakataa ton chintak dee bhaasaa dee talaas de yatan san| khud ik kavee vajon ttee. ais. eeleeatt ne pachham vich chintan dee kaavabhaasaa dee sirajanaa raaheen bauadhik kaavaparanparaa sathaapat keetee| manamohan vee jadon ajihe chintak kaveean de havaale pes karadaa hai taan us saahamane aapanee kavitaa dee vises ate vilakhan kaavabhaasaa hai| mainoo lagadaa hai ki panjaabee dee aadhunik kavitaa vich, naveen kavitaa raaheen manamohan varage kaveean dee kaavabhaashaa jis naveen kaavabhaasaa noo siraj rahee hai, auh prageetaatamakataa te agaleraa yatan hai| agaleraa safar main is karake naheen keh rihaa kiaunk panjaabee dee bahuginatee paatthak aje vee prageetak kavitaa daa ras maanan vaaliaan dee hai| geet, gazal, nazam vich prageetaatamakataa daa ih safar aje jaaree hai| par jis naveen talaash ch manamohan prayatanasheel hai nirasandeh uh chintan dee hee kaav bhaasaa hai| ajihee kavitaa vich rasikataa naheen, giaan dee sojhee dee dhunee hundee hai| ih dhunee kiaunk kavitaa dee bhaashaa vich hundee hai is lee ajihee kavitaa amoorat binbakaaree raaheen aapane sandes dindee hai| sandes kiaunk kise nischit jaan gharregharraae sach daa naheen hundaa, bahute

prabhaav ajihee kavitaa baare khud paatthak ne banaae hunde han| main manamohan dee kavitaa dee ajihee vilakhanataa baare mukh tauar te jiharree gal kahinaa chaahundaa haan uh ih hai ki ih kavitaa vishes hee naheen sagon soojhavaan paatthak dee kavitaa hai, kavitaa de sanchaar dee bahutee zinmevaaree vee paatthak te hee paindee hai| kavitaa de arathaan lee vee ajihee kavitaa paatthak lee sapes muhaeea karadee hai| 1990 ton baad dee panjaabee kavitaa vich ajihee kaavabhaashaa naal kee kavee jurr rahe han| bhaaven ki inhaan vichon har ik dee aapo aapanee visestaa ate visaa khetar hai| manamohan dee kavitaa dee is vises kaavabhaasaa daa chintan kihanaan sarokaaraan noo pes karadaa hai, dee pachhaan karanee is adhiain daa mool hai| manamohan dee kavitaa bhaaven kinee vee amoorat ate aatamamukhee subhaa dee lagadee hove, jeevant jeevan ate sadeevee sarokaaraan dee talaash naal jurree kavitaa hai|

chintan dee bhaashaa vich, amoorat binbakaaree raaheen vee manamohan dee kavitaa sanvedanaavaan de sansaar te ttikee hoee hai, eise kaaran is kavitaa vich vichaaradhaaraa, darashan ate giaan de bojhal sankalapaan de kathan naheen sagon aapane chintan noo pes karan lee manamohan kol ghattanaavaan, sathiteean ate itihaasamithihaas noo dtukaven kaavikabinbaan vich roopaantarit karan dee kalapanaa ate kaavikasamarath hai| uh vaaratak ate vaaratak kavitaa de farak noo vee baakhoobee jaanadaa hai| bhaaven ki ik kavee de tauar te manamohan ne 1990 tak agale chauaraahe tak 1982 ate man maheeal 1989 kaavasangreh de prakaashit hon taka batauar kavee aapanee pachhaan banaa lee see par jis vilakhan kaavabhaasaa karake us dee naveen panjaabee kavitaa vich pachhaan banee, dee shurooaat usade kaavasangreh sur sanket 1998 raaheen hee sanbhav hundee hai| sur sanket ton baad namit 2001, ath 2004, neel kantth 2008 ate duje shabadaa ch 2010 dee prakaashanaa naal usane panjaabee dee naveen kavitaa vich maualik ate vilakhan kaavabhaashaa talaas lee hai| khoj, aalochanaa de naal naal anuvaad de khetar vich vee uh nirantar kaarajasheel hai| saahit chintan deean naveen giaan pranaaleean vich usadee khaas dilachasapee hai jisadaa saboot usadeean do pramakh pusatakaan daireedeean vikhanddan bhaaratee shaasatar 2006, mishel fooko 2009 han| mithaalojee, vishav itihaas, autaraaadhunikataavaad, maarakasavaad vich usanoo vishes dilachasapee hai| panjaabee dee naveen kavitaa vich us noo utaraaadhunik kavee vajon prachhaaniaa jaa rihaa hai| koee sk naheen, panjaabee saahit chintan ute utaraaadhukitaavaad daa prabhaav jinhaan chintakaan ate kaveean ute piaa, manamohan vee unhaan vichon ik hai| par utaraaadhunikataa daa jiharraa mool, nisachataavaad ton paar jaan daa hai jaan mahaan birataantaan de bharamaan ton mukatee hai, noo taan manamohan apanaaundaa hai, autaraaadhunikataavaad ne jis itihaas ate

vichaaradhaaraa de ant daa ailaan keetaa hai usanoo apanaaun dee bajaae samaanaantar birataantaan de sanvaad ch aapane kaavachintan dee talaash karadaa hai| is pakh ton uh utaraaadhunikavaad deean seemaavaan ton vee paar daa kavee ban jaandaa hai| jain, budh, taaovaad, bhaaratee mithaalojee ate panjaab dee madhakaalee kaava paranparaa naal sanvaad usadee kavitaa chon dekhe jaa sakade han| aapane kaava sanvaad naal manamohan jis adhiaatam dee talaash kar rihaa hai bhaaven us noo kavitaa daa nav adhiaatam kihaa giaa hai par ih navaadhiaatam kise vee tarhaan mananamohan dee kavitaa noo dharam, adhiaatamavaad naal naheen jorradaa| jis adhiaatam dee gal uh khud vee kar rihaa hai usadaa arath siraf ihee banadaa hai ki uh aapane kaavauchaar raaheen bande de mool ate gauarav noo talaash rihaa hai| mool ate gauarav noo talaas karan dee zaroorat taan hee paindee hai jekar tuseen varatamaan pratee prateerodh rakhade ho| adhiaatam noo uh giaan naal jorrake, chintan dee dishaa niradhaarit karadaa hai, main us kaavabhaashaa dee talaas ch haan jisadee pahunch dhiaan dee e| dhiaan giaan dee pahilee pauarree e| ithon chintan dee dishaa niradhaarit hundee e| eise dishaa ne prateerodh usaarane hunde| manamohan dooje sbadaan ch, panaa 11 jekar varatamaan fizaa badalegee taan hee jangal dee thaan sabhiataa lavegee| bhavakh baare ajihe supane baare uh sur sanket dee kavitaa jangal vich kahindaa hai

kadon tak

huseen mauasam jalaavatan rahinage

aao

chun leee pataa pataa udaasee

chun leee sukeean shaakhaavaan daa mauan

te veeraanageean dee sarasaraahatt

taan ki

bhaavee itihaas

eih naa kahe

es jangal ch maanav sabhiaa hoeaa see|

sur sanket, panaa 42

namit kaavasangreh deean kavitaavaan dee sirajanaa karan tak manamohan aapane kaavachintan noo paribhaashit karanaa suroo kar dindaa hai| bhavakh vich usane kee sirajanaa hai dee chetanaa us lee mukh masalaa ban jaandaa hai| jadon uh ih kahindaa hai ki kavitaa mainoo siraj rahee hundee e jadon main siraj rihaa hunaa kavitaa, taan asal vich chetan padhar te uh aapane sarokaaraan noo vee talaash rihaa hundaa hai|

main usade ubhaaraan, kattaavaan, nukaraan noo

taraash rihaa hunaa

kavitaa shilape mere sarokaar, vichaar

kaaravihaar

namit, panaa 31

eise sangreh dee kavitaa drishattee vich tapash vich hariaalee dee aas raaheen jis bhavakhamukhee aashaa ton aasathaa rakhadaa hai us daa kaaran uh sadee kavitaa vich pragatt kar dindaa hai| bhavakh daa chihan kavitaa ch taan hee ubharadaa hai je varatamaan saveekaar naa hove| varatamaan noo manamohan prakiratee, mohaparak rishatiaan ate dosataan deean dosateean raaheen taan jiaoon jogaa mahisoos karadaa hai| par aje vee sabhiataa hinsaavaadee pravachanaan ch ghiree hoee hai| hun tak dee manakh dee praapatee vajon jiharree sabhiataa aseen eejaad keetee hai, ausadee hakeekat kee hai|

zahirabaadee havaavaan ugeean

dhoone deean khunbhaan ban

nigal geean poore de poore nagar

ranganasal de ahan ne jame

yaatanaavaan maare pichake dtidd

turade firade kankaal

bhukhaan te jangaan

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raaton raat usareean gharaan ch deevaaraan

pachhaane chihare ho ge ajanabee

asatitav shankit

kuntthaan dee shaasavat taanddav

namit, panaa 70

eise tarhaan uh soch 1, socha 3 kavitaavaan vich kramavaar maavaan, chaacheean te kudesanaan, aam aadamee baare, panj paaneean baare sochadiaan, aauarat, aam aadamee ate panjaabeeat de sarokaaraan noo pesh karadaa hai| isadaa ik kaaran ihee banadaa hai ki is jangal de samaanaantar uh prakiratee, jheelaan, dariaavaan, rukhaan, ttaahaneean, pahaarraan, samundaree lahiraan, aasamaan, chan, khet, fasalaan aad de drishabinbaan noo arath deean sanrachanaavaan naal niramit karake aapanee kavitaa de sanvedanaatamak prabhaav noo vadhaa laindaa hai| is ton vee manamohan deean uh kavitaavaan barreean bhaavapoorat han jinhaan vich ghar naal sanbandhat riste han| maan, patanee bache naal sanbandhit manamohan deean kavitaavaan bhaaven usade savaianubhav vichon pesh

hundeean han par inhaan kavitaavaan de prabhaav nij ton paar jaa ke har paatthak dee honee ban jaande han ate saaddeean sanvedanaavaan noo ttunbade han| roobaroo kavitaa vich ghareloo hinsaa ate daman noo manamohan ne sookham ahisaas naal hee pesh naheen keetaa sagon ghattanaa de birataant noo paaradarasee sach raaheen biaan keetaa hai| ajihee kavitaa noo parrhake bandaa zaroor sochadaa hai ki daman siraf raajakeesamaajik sansathaavaan hee naheen karadeean saaddeean ghareloo sansathaavaan jinhaan noo aseen aapanee malakeeat banaa liaa hai vichon vee nit hundaa hai|

preekhiaa ch aae prashanaan de

galat utar den te

main maariaa tainoo jad mere bache

taan hanjhooaan geean mereean akhaan

runiaa giaa kiaun galaa

rom rom kiaun ho giaa nam bhalaa.........bas

par naa toon hiliaa

naa koee teraa hanjhoo dduliaa

rihaa neeveen paaee baitthaa

dhur aatamaa tak zaar jaar

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pataa naheen kiaun utth piaa adhiaapak

mere andaron pulis dee varadee paa ke

dekhe jo tere chihare chon

aapaneean keeteeananakeeteean bhulaan

naheen jo ban sakiaa

naa jo kar sakiaa

chaahundaa tere raaheen karanaa|

dooje shabadaan ch, panaa 78

eise tarhaan kujh dinaan ton, maan 1, maan do ate maratabaan aad kavitaavaan vich uh aapane savai birataant raaheen us hakeekat val saaddaa dhiaan divaaundaa hai| jiharree saanoo aapane purakhiaan ton door karee jaa rahee hai| shahiree vikaas ne padaarathak vikaas de naal naal saaddeean mano sanrachanaavaan noo vee badal ditaa hai| aseen aapane bazuragaan noo aapane naal rakhan ton asamarathaa pragatt karade haan, aunhaan valon dite maratabaan raaheen unhaan deean simarateean hee sanbhaal sakade haan, auh vee belorree thaan rakh ke hee|

turan lagiaan

maan puraanaa achaaree maratabaan

mere ddaraaeivar noo dindee hai,

bahoo noo de deveen

dhiaan naal lijaaeen

mere pio dee nishaanee aa

jadon main viaahee gee see

taan de giaa see khareed ke maaee sevaa bazaaron

gaddee vich baitthaa soch rihaa saan mai

aitakeen achaar paaeaa

taan patanee noo kahaangaa

ki ese maratabaan ch paave

ghar varradiaan hee patanee bolee,

eeh kee chuk liaae o

ghar taan pahilaan kitaabaan.........

koorr kabaarr naal bhariaa piai

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ghar cho hor puraaneean vasataan vaang

eeh maratabaan vee

mere pitaraan dee haazaree lavaaegaa

ath, panaa 94

eih sarokaar bhaaven kine vee savaigat hon, ghareloo hon, varatamaan vich sanvedanasheel maanav noo jhanjorrade han, ajihe ahisaas ate sanvedanaavaan naal bharapoor manamohan dee kavitaa dharatee dee kavitaa ban ke aapanee bhoomikaa nibhaaundee hai| manamohan de kaavachintan dee vichaaradhaarak vilakhanataa ihee banadee hai ki uh kise vichaaradhaaraa te kharradee naheen| vichaaradhaaraa daa kaaraj us lee maanavee hai| jadon uh utaraaadhunikataa ton prabhaavat chintan ttipaneean karadaa hai taan us saahamane seemaavaan noo torrake maanav de mool naal jurran daa lakash hundaa hai| jadon uh itihaas vichon naaeikaamahaanpurasaan de havaale naal kavitaa sirajadaa hai taan vee us saahamane lakas maanav hee hundaa hai| asal vich manamohan vichaaradhaaraavaan noo libarett karan daa maadhiam banaa laindaa hai| is pakh ton uh vakhareean vichaaradhaaraavaan naal sanvaad rachaa ke maanavee gauarav noo sathaapit karan daa prayatan karadaa hai| is pakh ton aseen manamohan deean budh de havaale vaaleean do kavitaavaan dee udaaharan lai sakade haan| ath kaavasangreh vich uh zain

kavitaavaan de siralekh hetth jadon budh daa havaalaa dindaa hai taan budh dee vichaaradhaaraa us lee maaddal naheen| dukhaan dee thaah kiven paaee jaa sakadee hai| mahaanpurashaan naal ih sanvaad manamohan dee kavitaa dee visathaapan dee vidhee raaheen pes hundee hai| manamohan budh noo sanpooranataa jaan sarabagiaataa hon dee mith ton paar jaa ke, prashanaan vich ghire manakh noo itihaas kahindaa hai| asal vich ithe uh masaliaan de sanpooran hal noo mith man ke itihaas dee vaasatavikataa te zor dindaa hai|

sidhaarath taan naheen see toon

ki teraa paratanaa

jangalaan chon

hundai kise niravaan daa soochak

savaal aje vee ne saahaven

dukh aje vee ne uven hee

changaa rihai

naheen ne tere kol prashanaan de utar

paratiaan en toon

savaalaan ch ghiriaa|

changaa hee rihai

naheen paratiaa toon budh vaang

niravaan naal paratiaa viakatee

ho jaande mith

prashan naal paratiaa viakatee

ho jaande mith

prashan naal paratiaa manakh

eitihaas

ath, panaa 22

doojee kavitaa usade kaavasangreh neel kantth vichon bodh birakh dee lainde haan| ithe badh maaddal ban jaandaa hai| kiaunk varatamaan itihaas vich uh jis samasiaa sarokaar noo saahamane liaa rihaa hai usadaa sanbandh bhaaratee samaaj andar jaatapaat naal hai| dalit ate jaatee maamale noo aapanee maanavavaadee soch raaheen najatthan lee uh jiharraa birataant sirajadaa hai us vich us noo budh hee maaddal lagadaa hai| is kavitaa vich uh dalit masale noo vadhere santulit ate maanavee nazaree naal pesh karadaa hai| itihaas, mithihaas, vichaaradhaaraa, birataant us lee maadhiam banade han, aapane kaavachintan noo pragatt karan de, sanpooran maaddal naheen| jo ath deean jain kavitaavaan vichalaa budh prashanaan de ghere vich hai taan ithe uhee maaddal is lee banadaa hai taan jo bhaaratee braahamanik jaatee

jarrataa vaale birataant daa shakateesaalee prateeautar siraj sake|

munee dheere jihee uchare

bodh birakh hetth baitth keetaa jo vee giaan main arajit

saar antim usadaa eh

naheen hundaa koee vee janam ton uch neech

sabh kujh hai es janam ch

naa aseen pahilaan see kade es prithavee te

naa hovegaa kadee punar janam

neel kantth, panaa 7273

manamohan de ahisaas aine sookham han ki uh itihaas, mithihaas, prakiratee ton hee preranaa naheen laindaa sagon keerreean dee sahihond ate sahichaar noo vee aadam sabhiataa dee hinsaan de samaanaantar pesh kar dindaa hai| jiharraa vee varataaraa us lee maaddal ban sakadaa hai, auh usanoo aapanee sookham sanvedanaa raaheen sirajanaa shuroo kar dindaa hai| is sirajanaa daa makasad sapastt hundaa hai, par peshakaaree anakaavik naheen hundee| keerreean daa samaaj shaasatar kavitaa usade vichaaradhaarak pravachan daa hisaa hee hai par isadee sanvedanaa kavitaa dee hai|

kam ch rujheean

kiven sahihond ch rahindeean ne

kinaa sahichaar inhaan ch

jaanadeean ne

keval prem te hamadaradee daa sang hee naheen bahut

yakeen te sahiyog de rishate vee zarooree ne

keerree daa dimaag hunde baniaa

sansaar de sarab padaarathaan ton jiaadaa

sookham tantooaan ton

aadamee de masatik ton shaaeid ghatt...........

taan hee zahir naheen enhaan ch us jinaa

aapanee nasal naal keetaa

dhroh jinaa bande ne

pataa naheen kise hor praanee ne keetaa hove

aapanee jaatee sang|

ath,panaa 4445

prateerodh dee jiharree sur neel kantth kaavasangreh vich pragatt hoee see usadaa chetan roop dooje shabadaan ch kaavasangreh dee kavitaa vich vadhere roop vich vekhan noo miladaa hai| dooje shabadaan ch dee kavitaa tak pahunchadiaan, dhiaan

ate giaan dee pauarree raaheen uh aapane chintan dee dishaa dee chon karadaa nazar aaundaa hai| ithe tak pahunchadiaan manamohan dee prateerodhak dristtee savaigat, sathaanak ate aantarikataa ton paar jaa ke sathiteeanprasathiteean de kaaranaan dee taarakikataa val vee vadhadee nazar aaundee hai| kaaranaan dee thaah paaun dee taangh hee sirajak noo vichaaradhaarak banaa dindee hai| manamohan taan kaaranaan dee thaah paaun dee taangh vich us sach noo vee jaananaa chaahundaa hai jiharraa varataariaan de vaaparan dee teh vich chhupiaa hundaa hai| maarakasavaad de saar ate pratakh osasenache anad apapearanache de sankalapaan dee sojhee kaaran hee usanoo lagadaa hai|

jo dikhaaee dindaa

jo sunaaee dindaa

asal ch uh naheen hundaa

hundaa hai asal ch jo ho rihaa hundaa

auh dikhaaee naheen dindaa

sunaaee naheen dindaa

ain saaf saaf disadiaan sunadiaan vee .........

dooje shabadaan ch, pan 51

eih uparokat sataraan disadiaansunadiaan kavitaa deean antim sataraan han| ihanaan sataraan ton pahilaan do jhaakeean han| pahilee vich sarahad de doven paase varadeean, tamage, turale paaee sipaaheean daa paracham vaapasee daa drish, darashakaan andar des bhagatee daa zajabaa utejat kar rihaa hai| ih bheerr naahare laa rahee hai| par agalee jhaakee vich

vajade bigulaan ch

desh bhagatee de taraaniaan

te bheerr deean jhaarreean de role ton beasar

zeero laaeen te

dohaan deshaan de ahilakaar

kar rahe duaa salaam

milaa rahe hath

banh rahe ik dooje de kaaranaamiaan

kis noo sunaa rahe ne naare darashak.........vas

kisanoo dikhaa rahe kavaaeid sipaahee........... vas

dooje shabadaan ch pan 51

ajihe drishaan raaheen manamohan us sadhaaran bande sipaaheedaraska noo pes karadaa hai jiharre ih jaanade hee naheen ki uh naare ate kavaaeid kis noo sunaa rahe han jad ki ahilakaar taan hath milaaunde, eik dooje deean taareefaan

de pul banh rahe han| saadhaaran bande lee vatanaprasatee de kee arath han| bas savaal de javaab talaashan hit hee manamohan ajiheean kavitaavaan dee sirajanaa karadaa hai| sangharas daa ih pravachan deekhiaa kavitaa vich kaale arameekee faraiddarik ddagalas dee gulaamee ton mukatee dee jusatajoo raaheen mukatee de asal arathaan noo vee pragatt karadee hai| ih kaavanaaeik mar ke naheen sagon jeeaunde jeea sangharash karake gulaamee ton mukatee chaahundaa hai| samundar, ddoonghe paanee ate panchheean ton aazaadee de arath sikh ke, eih naaeik ih vee jaan giaa hai ki us kol aazaadee de sangharash vich jeevan ton vadh kujh hor gavaaun lee, jadon ki paaun lee barr kujh hai

hai kidhare koee rab...........bas

karaave jo mainoo aazaad

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jahaajaan ton sikh liaa ddoonghe paaneean ch taranaa......

panchheean ton jaan liaa khulhe asamaanaan ch uddanaa......

mere kol gavaaun lee